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Oh, whoa. That chapter was so freaking intense. I actually screamed, \'Too many asteriks!\'

Chap 23-24. Wow. Lot\'s of action. Great sex. Each story gets better and better, and, you update frequently. Thank you! Can\'t wait for next chapter.

Ch 22 - \"not even the great Dumbledore can force an elf to reveal a secret given him\" - but they could bring Dumbledore there on an excuse? And where is Eli!? Eli isn\'t limited by Hogwarts house-elf rules. BTW, great idea to have Odessa be a multiple shapeshifter, but now I wonder if that is true of all Animagi - i.e., that Animagi can learn to change into different forms. And since Marcus doesn\'t know, he may not recognize that it\'s Odessa, although Hermione and Severus might recognize the size of those claws from Marcus\' injuries. Odessa\'s \"other\" shape isn\'t bigger than a reticulated python or lion, is it? And Marcus is a big dragon? Ooh, hurry with the next chapter, please! Can\'t wait any longer!

Another great chapter!

Ch.22 - Wow.... great chapter! Ok, I knew it!!!! I knew Snape was thinking about children! Yaaaaaaaaay!!!!! And Hermione too?! Maybe if they talk about it and Hermione sees how interested he is in having children with her, maybe she\'ll be more enthusiastic, and possibly those patches she\'s working on will come in handy, eh?! wooooooooo!!!! And yeah, I agree..... I think if it\'s a little girl Snape would sooooo be putty mutty puddles of mush, hahaha! But not in a bad way. He\'d still be all Snape-ish, but more sexy and gentle, hahahaha! Wow..... I really hope they have a little girl. I think Snape would need to have a girl first, because I think if he had a boy first than things might repercuss from his own childhood. I know he wouldn\'t be like tht exactly, but you know what I mean. Anyways....... I can\'t wait!!!! Oooooooo..... and I can\'t wait for them to roam the grounds! woooo!!! This is so exciting! I check for updates like every hour now! hahhaahahaha! I\'m sooooooo addicted, haha! Ah well, excellent read! Toodles!

omfg... what kind of cliffhanger is that! goodness... UPDATE NOW. im absolutely addicted with this.

Damn, your stories are getting better and better. I really can\'t wait until you update again!! Btw, is Marcus an Animagi? Can\'t remember if you ever mentioned it before if he was or wasn\'t. Anyway, Odessa really is something, though why does she attack Severus? Is she too gone in her jealousy? I\'m still wondering why Hermione and Severus discuss their nightly adventure in the corridor for Odessa to over hear? No matter, love the story and I can\'t wait for the \'show down\'.

As I am guilty of being a lazy reviewer, I\'ll just say something to all stories that were posted before hand. Amazing, I haven\'t seen a series of stories before where the author has improved so much as you did. The depth of the stories seem to get deeper and deeper with each chapter. I bow to thee... Please keep posting in these regular intervalls, I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ch.23 - AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeah, where IS Marcus!!!! Oh no!!!! They better transform back, and fast, so Hermione can kick some kitty ass!!!!! Muahahahahahahaha!!! Oh hurry hurry hurry, this wait is killing meeeeeee!!!! Wow, this was awesome!!! Can\'t wait for the next part, wooooooooooo!!!! Toodles!

OH MY BLOODY HELL!

Jeez! Oh please update soon! That\'s just totally evil! Totally totally totally evil! Like big time evil! And Blackmail too! Ahhhhhh!

I hope this suffices as to your needs... and that you update soon!

man what is going to happen is there going to be a cat fight ..... and where is marcus ... please more

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