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Ch 26 - ooh, please give us Hermione confronting Marcus! Lots of Veritaserum (and maybe bribes of using Severus\' new potion on Marcus\' scars from Odessa) or even threats. Would Hermione remember that Odessa eats lots of almost-raw meat at dinner? I hope Marcus isn\'t \"bored\" with things now! Thanks for posting a new chapter.

Ch 30 - rabid reviews? Who from? (looks innocent) \"screaming grandchild\" - ah, so THAT is what inspired you to have snarling panther and lioness fighting - a child fighting on your lap! Hmm, now for Dumbledore to deal with the problem of house-elves with conflicting loyalties.... I do hope Marcus gets off, as he really did try to talk Odessa out of Severus, and meant well when he promised to hid her Animagus secret. But time for Marcus to talk with Cassandra.... Thank you for updating and ending our anxieties! And thanks to the \"screaming grandchild\" for inspiring you for that fight!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!

WHEN SMART MEN DO STUPID THINGS!!!! WHAT IS HE THINKING!!!!
Never trust a woman obessed!!!!! If he ends up fucking her i will be extremely pissed!!!!!
That damn bitch!!!!!! I want Hermione to scratch her eyes out!!!!!!!!!

I am looking forward to seeing how Severus talk with Odessa will be going. I wonder if Hermione will have to rescue her husband.

Sandra

Wow...I\'m a little shocked that you actually killed Odessa. I wonder how Hermione is going to deal with the guilt? Update soon. :)

Well Severus\'s quick thinking may have gotten them out of a tight situation but he is heading into one that will be even more dangerous. Whew! That is really a sick kitty.

BTW, I forgot to mention earlier, the scene with Hermione and Severus romping about in their animagnus forms was really hot.

For a brilliant wizard, he sure does some stupid things...Severus, you better remember your animagus...oops, can he fit in the room? lol

Accckkkkkkkkkkkk! of course you had to take a break...you probably needed a cold drink after that chapter. Severus you idiot! I hope Hermione kicks his ass.

Thank you for the quick update but now I\'m heading back to my paper and I hope you are working at yours... maybe another chapter tonight?

WOW!!! that is all I can say is wow!!! this is a great story... I have been following your stories and they are sooo good you write really well.. i hate getting into a story and the author can\'t write well... thatnks!!! but I just wanted to say that I think that this is a great story!!!

The tension is KILLING me!!! Get the next chapter up, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! Horrible horrible writer trying to kill us with her words...... *grumble*