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for Lucius\' Revenge

by Unchaste

schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write more, I\'d like to see how and why she left Harry, and the big battle with her parents.
Lucius got off on her betraying her family for his=)
person Sammie Curls
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have started out excellently with this story. I hope this will not be the end. I hate that it is only implied Lucius and Narcissa. I would love to see your take on their relationship. I think it will interest the readers more. Many people have there different views on them and I would like to see what yours it. Excluding that, your doing a fine job. Keep up the good work and update soon

Love and kisses
Sammie Curls

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