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for What Might Be Done

by LoupGarou1750

person Storm
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So cute. I loved the whole friend-playing thing in chapter 5. It was cute. great job
person Kat Potter
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, what do you know! I liked it!:D
person Anon
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad to see you posting here. I absolutely love your style of writing!

Firstly I have to say you write a drunken Snape beautifully!

Secondly, please don\'t forget to add a disclaimer. The admin here are deleting all fics with no disclaimer. I\'d hate to see your work of art get pulled.

Ok..off to chapter 2.
person Anon
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this story is hilarious! I was laughing out loud at Severus\'s clumsy attempt to proposition Harry.

More more more!!!
person Angel
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read the first chapter now and I just had to say that this is the best line (The wizarding world didn\'t much care for Death Eaters, ex or otherwise. Stupid prejudice, really. So we gathered together in silly robes and masks and killed people. We were young. We were foolish. Spring was in the air. Where is my drink?) I read in any fanfiction. It is just sooooo hilarius! I\'m going to keep reading now so don\'t disturb.
person Angel
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now I read it all and I love it, a little OOC but I don\'t care! It\'s fab, wonderful, hilarius and... and... just great!
person JJ
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m hooked!!!
Your characters are very realistic and your scenario is plausable too.
I loved the interaction between the Trio in Ch. 5. They were talking just like real people!!!!
And the pillow fights and wrestling was cute, as well.
More please!
person Katie K
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! This is fantastic! And hilarious hehehe! please update soon!
person Moi
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have followed this story on fanfiction.net. Is it getting too racy for that site? I was glad to see it here. Re-reading the first five chapters was funny all over again. I particularly love Snape and McGonagall drinking together. And the Grand Vizier and Consort Keeper of the Privy Everything. Love it!
person Lady Gray
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a funny story, I love the interaction between the characters. the trio is hilarious and snape and minerva, i laughed so I hard i nearly fell out of my chair. too funny.