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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice beginning. Looking forward to reading more. Keep writing and thanks for sharing.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles manaically* the whole house plotting... lol.
I liked the reasoning behind the safehouses, instead of just dumping people there without a reason, you have a good one. Although Dumbledore may have gotten over his depression a bit quickly, but he wouldnt be dumbledore otherwise... ^_^
*thumbs up*
I liked the reasoning behind the safehouses, instead of just dumping people there without a reason, you have a good one. Although Dumbledore may have gotten over his depression a bit quickly, but he wouldnt be dumbledore otherwise... ^_^
*thumbs up*
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are off to a wonderful start. I absolutley adore Hermione\'s sneakiness, really hopes she gets those two stubborn fools together. Cant wait for more!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have read a few of these fanfiction stories, Not tooo many but that one was so far the most interesting you should hurry up and write a little more I really want to know whats going to happen, i dont think you should tell the reader her \'plan\' i think you should have the other people in the house do stuff to \'help\' them along, but just enough to let the reader know that they are in on her plan.