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for Why Should I Care.

by Kyrian

person Donavon.
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you are hot when it comes to Hermione and Draco. Look forward to more soon,
but don\'t neglect your school work. Best wishes,
person Debbie
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Those Chapters were great!! I\'ve loved it so far, I love the fact that you made Draco, Still have his \'Bad Boy\' act, and not make him all sappy. I can\'t wait to read more! Post more soon!!



~ Debbie <3
person meh
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! that was really good! keep writing!
person Sommer
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why did she have to run????
Who cares if she missed a class or not.
Great Part
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again... Please update soon... Now I\'m all hooked and stuff... *rolls eyes* Lavender is such an ego-hound... LoL

Bek
person michelle
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting story. *grins* update soon.
person nrvana06
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start, keepup the great work!
person Anon
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, keep writing. My only criticism would be to spell check more carefully, or find a beta to proofread it. For example, a book is called a tome, not a tomb. Little mistakes like that distrct from your story.
person Alli
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Do somthing mean to Lavender. I hate that girl.
Great Story.
person bubbles
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey. Great beginning so far - there\'s SO much potential for this and I\'m already really enjoying it. Please update quickly - I\'m very much looking forward to what happens. :)