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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*eyes widen* well,well,well heh is there gonna be more?! if there is I am BEGGING YOU to update! please? that was very....erm...oh i dunno....as Draco said...or thought \"FANFUCKINGTASTIC!\" XD haha
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Overall, not terrible, but I\'m gonna point out a few minor flaws in both your logic and word choice.
1. Nagini is not the snake Harry freed. The potion bringing Voldemort back to life contained her venom; boa constrictors aren\'t venomous creatures. They squeeze their prey to death.
2. Draco is most certainly not on the side of the Order, as much as fangirls would like to think so. He tried to kill Dumbledore, for crying out loud! People will argue that between years 6 and 7, he could very well have a change of heart, but his thoughts about things have never changed in the past. Why would they change now?
3. When you used the word \"syllabic\", I think you meant \"sibilant\". Your word choice means \"Pronounced with every syllable distinct\" and mine means \"producing a hissing sound like that of (s) or (sh)\".
1. Nagini is not the snake Harry freed. The potion bringing Voldemort back to life contained her venom; boa constrictors aren\'t venomous creatures. They squeeze their prey to death.
2. Draco is most certainly not on the side of the Order, as much as fangirls would like to think so. He tried to kill Dumbledore, for crying out loud! People will argue that between years 6 and 7, he could very well have a change of heart, but his thoughts about things have never changed in the past. Why would they change now?
3. When you used the word \"syllabic\", I think you meant \"sibilant\". Your word choice means \"Pronounced with every syllable distinct\" and mine means \"producing a hissing sound like that of (s) or (sh)\".
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh! almost sort of a voyeur draco...but not! cool. i think the closet will be draco\'s new fave place, haha! hope next chap is soon!