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GAHHHHH! You left it there??? This story has me hooked. So well thought out and I just love Cassandra(and Endora even though she was sleeping this chapter). This is meant as high praise because I usually dislike most original characters. Marcus is developing into quite a person in his own right. And I adore your version of SS/HG. Thanks so much for the quick updates. If you ever write a story that is all original, please include me in the list of people that you notify. Thank you again for the story and for the quick updates.

PS re Ch 25 - I notice that Marcus\' weapon hasn\'t been able to destroy any of the critters - only Severus and Hermione\'s weapons can\'t. Perhaps Endora or Cassandra or Fiona can give him a love-charged weapon?

You know, I could actually get to... well, \'like\' Marcus. He is still the biggest arsehole going, but he seems to be softening a little. Maybe seeing that Snape hasn\'t been substantially changed from being a strong man will give him something to grow from if he survives.

i find myself checking for updates so often it\'s becomming an obsession! and you\'re doing nothing to help me by posting so often!!!!
nice chapter, i\'ve found myself actually caring for marcus\'s safety. -something i never thought i\'d do...

\"Ohh..I see your goodies!\" *ROTFL* That was the best line ever! Oh my...that was priceless.... What a great job with the details you gae us. I was right there with them. And, clever little trick of Peeves...not telling them that they\'d be naked! Agian...classic. I love what you have done creating the alternate plane here. So...they preyed on Hermione\'s feelings first. Her grandfather...that was wicked man! Oh,...yeah for Marcus for pointing it out. I\'m glad Severus trusts him a little. I certianly hope you have a fast update after this. I am so anxious! Ever your devoted fan.....

Ch 24 - YES!!!!!! Fiona is on the scene to help Marcus!! (and nag him about continuing the dragon\'s line....) Now why did Cassandra enslave all those spirits to her in the first place? She\'s not evil, is she? And if she doesn\'t have more spirits serving her there, how will she help others who need her help like Marcus? Cassandra is able to move back-and-forth - BOTH WAYS - between here and \"plane\"? Scary, scary! More, more! Thank you for posting, Ms_Figg!

I\'ve been following your stories now for quite awhile and as an author myself I have to say you\'re an incredible writer. Your plotlines are mindblowing. Severus and Hermione make a great married couple, using their love as a shield was smart.
I haven\'t said anything up until now. But Marcus and Cassandra has grown on me since you introduced them, and I\'m really excited to see what you\'ll do with them. I think we already have our virginal, bookworm and dark hero in Severus and Hermione. Personally, I think Endora has served her purposes as Cassandra\'s friend. And as a character she was the device in which Marcus can get closer to Cassandra. Endora\'s been made a \"woman\" and that\'s great but I think as far as couple\'s go, Cassandra would be an awesome woman for Marcus.
I think if you were to put Endora with Marcus we would be seeing another Severus and Hermione love story all over again. And that can become a bit redundant. Adding Cassandra as Marcus\'s lover might be the best way to go, it adds spice to the story.
Keep \'em coming Ms_Figg.

Ch 21 - omigosh, what a lucky Endora! And I do wonder what Cassandra will do on that battlefield - whether she will survive, and whether Endora will be there with Albus to help pull out Marcus and Cassandra and Peeves. Boy, that Marcus is getting softer all the time - redecorating Endora\'s house and wardrobe. No wonder Fawkes was singing for Marcus. Okay, I\'m ready for the battle!!

I wonder if Marcus might be better suited with Endora...he really was a nice guy in this chapter. It made me hopeful.

on, is it? fantastic. bring it, my delightful Lady Figg.