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for #7 ~ The Ghost and Lady Snape

by Ms_Figg

person larissa
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great as always. i think you develope characters better than J.K does. I hope we get to see the Marcus/Cassandra story to its conclusion as well as the Severus/Crazy stalker story.
person JW
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 32 - oh, how lovely! Poor Marcus chopping wood - \"You will perform no magic when you are on my island, dragon man\" - no magic EVER??? Sounds like he should ask her to Hogwarts, off her island. Can I guess that he won\'t go to Rosmerta when he goes back to Hogsmeade? Hmm.... sequel with Severus and Hermione (and Granny Fiona) giving Marcus hints on courting Cassandra! I\'d still like to see his dragon ancestor someday, too. How about a Cassandra-Dumbledore meeting sometime? Thank you for writing this fic! More, more!
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I did notice how the woman below Severus looked a bit like a different original character of yours. Very well done Ms_Figg. I knew Hermione\'s worst fear would be losing Severus, I just didn\'t know it would be in that way. Caught me off guard again. Don\'t wait too long on the new chapters, please? Oh and Cassandra and Marcus, wonderful touch. Exquisite as usual.
person Cutiepi
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have read all of your Herminone/Snape stories and I must say that you are a phenomenal writer. I have throughouly enjoyed every one of your stories and I believe this one is my favorite. Having enemies work together to conquer another is great. I think that leaving out any sort of hint of what Hermione\'s fear might be is wonderful, it gives an excitement to the whole story. I hope you finish with it quickly so I can read it. Thank you for providing such wonderful entertainment.
person firewall
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought the chapter was great. I enjoyed every part of it including Hermione receiving rebukes from several sources...she does tend at times in your story to be holier-than-thou. It wouldn\'t hurt her to relax and be a little more forgiving. It will be interesting to see her worst fear.
person angel
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeaaa please save marcus and please more more and keep up the awesome work..later for now

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person SteffieSnape
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CH.28 - Marcus\' line at the end was PER-FECT-O!!!!! LOVE IT!!!! Ooooooo..... interesting fear Hermione had too! So was that Bella perhaps? I don\'t know if she had green yes, I thought they were grey, but I\'m not sure. But I know she had black hair. errrrr *has the chills* that image would diturb me, no doubt. Poor Hermy. I noticed you didn\'t have Snape face his fear, but maybe that\'s because he already admitted what it was. He seems to be the dstrongest mentally out of all of them, so maybe an attack like that wouldn\'t come to him so easily. Either way, excellent chapter as usual! I can\'t wait to see how it ends! I know I know I know I ask you all the time, but when are Severus and Hermione gonna have kiiiiiiiiiiiiids! hahahahahhahahaha!!! You know they want it!!! They would have exceptional children if I do say so myself!!!! Ok, can\'t wait for more! Toodles!
person bronte
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wait...did Severus actually face HIS fear? Or is that point moot?

Fiona\'s sense of humor made me happy.
person Adena
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good..the tension is really high.

I\'m wracking my brain trying to think of what Hermione\'s deepest fear might be. I guess we\'ll have to wait.

Cassandra was amazing! And I\'m soo glad Marcus is realizing that in some way he needs her!

Great work, Ms_Figg!
person SteffieSnape
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.27 - Woooooaaaaah.......