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for #7 ~ The Ghost and Lady Snape

by Ms_Figg

person Adena
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great story, Ms_Figg!

I\'m so looking forward to hearing more about Severus and Hermione by way of Odessa!
And I certainly hope that you create a story arc for Marcus and Cassandra,(*winks*) that would be just as great!
Looking forward to reading more of your wonderful work!!
person SteffieSnape
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! That was such a cute story! weeeeeeeeeeeee! Ok, s I can see a new story here for Cassandra and Marcus.... and myabe possibly one involving children by the love-making of Severus and Hermione?! hahahahahhaa! You know oyu want to! hahaha! Ok, I\'m not forcing you, but I would love to see your spin on a tale involving Snape and Hermione\'s kids. Well excellent read as usual my friend! I\'ll be looking forward to more stories in the future! Best of luck and Toodles.... for now!
person JW
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 30-31 - perhaps he should tell Endora to take on both the guys! She might not think of that (yet) on her own. As for Rosmerta - I like her, but Cassandra.... what if Cassandra requires Marcus\' service to do something like scrub caudrons?!
person beeky63
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent story. Can\'t wait for the next one. May your quill never run dry.
Toodles.
person tak
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
everytime a story ends you leave an opening for another. quite a talent you\'ve got there for doing that...

what i find really great about your stories is that even the final chapter, where there were no canon characters and was an original setting, your story still felt like harry potter fiction.

well done, another great story. (another one for the favorites)
tak.
person angel
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow great chapters im glad for endora... and mione and snape .. cant wait in till next chatper in till then keep up the awesome awesome work and later for now

angel
person SteffieSnape
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.29 and 30 - Whoops! Same chapter posted, oh well! That chapter was quite humorous! hahahaha! I loved it! So it will be Cassandra with Marcus, eh? I suppose Endore does need someone a bit more mellow. She might lose her patience with him, considering the way Marcus is. Anyways.... can\'t wait for the ending! Toodles!
person Ms_Figg
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SteffieSnape and Other Readers: Sorry about the double-posting. Is fixed now.




person lovethelab
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy to see that Marcus has begfun to change his ways. And I was thinking about you vision and the woman who wants to be there - - I think Hermione would have the most trouble/problems if she came while Hermione was pregnant - - especially long about the 7th month where nothing is right in the world and no amount of husbandly reassurance can change it - - DAMN hormones! I really hope you write a story with our obsessive Severus freak!
person tak
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how has this story slipped to three stars? the quality of the writing and plot have maintained their (commendable) pace throughout this. i wonder if someone is being malicious with your work Ms Figg? or do they just want pwp? perhaps they are unaware that this is a series of work, where the characters are built up over several stories?