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for #7 ~ The Ghost and Lady Snape

by Ms_Figg

person Hypatia
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love the characterization you\'ve given Peeves, who is quite possibly my favorite character (after Snape, of course) in the HP canon. I\'ve looked for him in the current movies, but alas, he only exists in the minds of JKR, her Hp book pages, and us. (Um....please don\'t think of creating sex scenes with Peeeves...as much as I love him. I mean this seriously).
person Snapelover11
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done! You have an exceptional grasp on the magical world, did you know that? Your whole explaination of everything was extremly believable. And including Marcus\' family line in it just adds flavor. (Still waiting ona great beasty fic about his ancestor dragon and the Fiona chick. *lol*) Peeves is beyond funny, you know. I love it all! DOn\'t even mind no lemons in this one. *wink*
person calamitysandra
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are amazing!

Sandra
person SteffieSnape
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.5 - Oooooooo..... this is getting so interesting! I can\'t wait to read more! Weeeeee! Toodles!
person Greyfalcon
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed all your stories very much, though I do have a request if you write another one, all the threats seem to be going Hermoine\'s way, nothing wrong with having a woman as a villian after all.
person angel
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes please tell us what is up with the ghost ... and snape and mion have to say thank up the marcus now ....well in till next chapter keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
person firewall
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7 - Now that would have been frightening. Imagine being pulled from a sensual dream and face that nameless horror? You certainly helped me visualize it. Fantastic chapter.

I have to give Marcus points. He still dislikes Severus but he is coming through for them. HAHAHAHAAHA! I loved the naked boggart of Severus...definitely well-endowed.
person firewall
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh, I just read Greyfalcon\'s post...now there you have your next story...a female antagonist trying to encroach on Hermione\'s man....yippee! We\'ll keep you tied to the keyboard with ideas.
person JW
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 7 - great chapter! I was intrigued again by this spectre - \"The presence wavered, remembering his secret shame\" - sounds like he had his own \"Mudblood\" female, perhaps even used her blood to write the book. With all the students in the hallway convulsing, there may be a lot of fear in the school, and Dumbledore should insist on Hermione sharing that book\'s info with Marcus and Dumbledore. The book and the Time-Turner - they need to retrieve both ASAP before the book\'s influence rewrites Hogwarts history. Well, Marcus wanted a challenge, and he has it! (BTW, why is Marcus envious of Severus\' size? I thought Marcus\' was able to telescope up to dragon-size....)
person cutie_berry
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uh-oh... Lady Snape\'s in big trouble... I wonder who the creature is? Can\'t wait for your next update!