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for #7 ~ The Ghost and Lady Snape

by Ms_Figg

person JW
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 9-10 - gotta love that Marcus! \"Wild sex and love. Must not be too bad.\" Heh! Maybe one day you\'ll write a dragon-lady for him, someone equal to Marcus in strength. \"Leftover love. Whatever.\" Yup, that\'s Marcus! He hasn\'t ever had anyone to love him after his parents died. I love the way you\'ve tied Marcus into the book - his ancestress and all. Now how did Marcus figure out Hermione used a Time-Turner to lose the book? Isn\'t it unwise to leave the book where others can find it? I just hope Marcus is safe in his own quarters; I\'ll assume he knows the same anti-Alastair wards that Severus is using. And I\'ll assume Dumbledore is telling the staff to protect the Muggleborns. Thanks for the wonderful chapters!!
person Laura
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great great great! Another wonderful story from my favorite S/H author. This is really compelling. I\'m curious to find out the connection between Alistor and Marcus or if it\'s just M\'s abilities as an eradicator that enable him to sense the ghost. I feel a posession of Marcus coming on! Please don\'t let him impregnate Hermione! That\'s Severus\' job!
I know I shouldn\'t try to figure out what\'s coming but I can\'t help it! Can\'t wait for more. :-)
L
person mary
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person Koda
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The next chapter will certainly be interesting.
person firewall
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 8-10 Whoa! You really developed that nicely. I especially enjoyed Severus\'s familiar\'s delivery (in more ways than one. Gotta love attitude). I especially am enjoying your different levels of darkness that you are developing. Each of the major characters have darkness in them to different degrees. The way they react to the spirit corresponds to the amount they each possess. Interesting.
I am really looking forward to your next updates. : )
person angel
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man he was a sick sick man ... please update soon i would love to read what will happen next and in till then keep up the awesome awesome work and later for now

angel
person Hypatia
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Marcus giving sex advice to Snape....eewww!!! Snape should have given him sex advice concerning a 3-way with Filch and Mrs Norris. Let\'s not turn the Potions Master into a weenie!!!
person SteffieSnape
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.8 - WONDERFUL!!! Peeves..... Marcus..... Dumbledore...... all of it! This is going to be brilliant! Can\'t wait for more! Toodles!
person Koda
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Encouragement given. ^.^ You rock, Figg. <3
person amy
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eh, not as great as your other fics, but it was fun to read.