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for #7 ~ The Ghost and Lady Snape

by Ms_Figg

person mary
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was good! Are there going to be more sequals?
person Rainbow
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I\'m glad that Marcus has hope!

I can\'t wait for you to write a story with Odessa Divine. She\'s great!
person JTBJAB
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! Where the hell have I been? Argh! This has been happening a lot recently... damn it! Although it is kinda cool not being worried by cliff hangers... lol! But even so... anyway, just read the entire of \'The Ghost and Lady Snape\' and it is brilliant - as is your other stories... I can\'t wait to find out what happens next though - you always have surprises in store for us readers! Well done and Good luck with whatever you choose to write next and in the future!
person angel
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great i cant wait in till your next story and in till then later for now and keep up the awesome awesome work and later for now

angel
person droxy
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story! Marcus has met his match for now...

Great lemons inthis fic.
person pumkin
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it. thanks for another wonderful story. are you going to write one about marcus and the obeah woman. i hope so. keep up the good work. i hope you write more with severus and hermione. i don\'t think their story will ever end. good luck.
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent ending. I love how you\'re giving Marcus some depth. Honestly Ms_Figg, you are one of the best authors I have read for HG/SS and I absolutely love reading anything you have to to write. The muses truly are inspiring you. Your original characters are great as well as the spin you give on the canon characters. I will be looking for a story soon with Odessa *wink, wink, nudge, nudge*
person Sunny
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaww this was such a cute end...perfect really...I loved your Cassandra...and was glad that Marcus becomes what he is at the end!!! I really enjoyed your story...can\'t wait until you write your next!!!!
person Firewall
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I especially enjoyed Marcus\'s peaceful ending to this story. He is such a complex and violent individual that the juxaposition of such serenity and calm was very powerful. I am looking forward to Marcus\'s story if you so decide to write it.

In retrospect, the journey Snape\'s character has taken in your stories has been remarkable. I remember writing in your first fic about the casual disdain he showed Hermione. His focus was on sex or, in reality, fucking pure and simple. You had him show such growth as he suffered through accepting softer feelings until this last story where he maintains his passionate intensity that Hermione loves as well as the ability to reach out to her with the overwhelming love he feels for her. Amazing.

Once again thank you for sharing your brilliance here and I sincerely hope that you will continue to share with us your stories. As I said before, I need my daily Figg fix. : )
person Firewall
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BTW, when I wrote above about writing in you first story....I meant in a review...I only wish I had your talent.