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for #7 ~ The Ghost and Lady Snape

by Ms_Figg

person firewall
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a good chapter. Your story had been barreling along at a rapid rate and the last couple of chapters slowed us down a bit and let us take a breath. I really like the levels of darkness you have in this story from the darkness in Hermionethat affects really no one but herself to the viscious evil darkness in Alistar. Terrific and I can\'t wait for more.
person firewall
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PS I wondered if all the spirits of the women Alistar murdered are waiting on the astral plane. The astral plane\'s answer to apriori incanatem.
person anon
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on Ms Figg...I need an update!!!

*pretty please*

:)

love your work.

person Killer Kadoogan
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Golly, Ms Figg!!! What a great story! What more can I say! Update soon, por favor! Happy writing, dearie! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Hugs,
Killer K :)
person fruity
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
once again, more awesome chapters!

keep it up.
person SteffieSnape
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.12 - COOL! There was a lot of foreshadowing in this chapter, which was excellentay! So their fears will become their foe when they enter their spirit world.... and maybe even put the power of love to the test. GREAT! An easy challenge is not a challenge, so I like the fact that there is so much residing on this future journey to destroy Alistar. Excellent idea! Can\'t wait for more! Toodles!

Hmmm...... I see Marcus venturing to the Islands at some point in his life, muahahahaahaha!!!! Coconut rum anyone?!
person droxy
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a quicky update and a quicky for SS/HG!
person JW
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 13 - ack!! Poor Marcus - he hasn\'t had the benefit of Hermione\'s research, so he doesn\'t know what he\'s going to face. Hmm, perhaps Hermione can go to his classroom to ask him some questions. Perhaps Marcus\' students will run for Snapes. And perhaps Fiona is in the astral plane, waiting to help Marcus - but could Marcus free his ancestress? Where\'s the next chapter????? (greedy reader stamps feet impatiently)
person angel
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh man i wonder what will happen to him when he get s there i hope all goes well for them and they can get him or is he going to her mion first hmmm please update soon and keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
person angel
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow snape know how to make mione fell in a woman..... and maybe cassandra is just what the doctor order for marcus ... please update soon and in till next time keep up teh awesome work and later for now

angel