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for #7 ~ The Ghost and Lady Snape

by Ms_Figg

person droxy
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes, bookish HG-S at work..

Like and appreciate your rapid updates
person Koda
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Maybe he promised Minerva that they\'d go out to dinner that night.
person firewall
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This astral plane war is going to be really exciting. It offers so many different avenues for you to take when you write your story. Beautifully planned.
person Aili
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re still at your crazy speed! Wow. Your updates...It\'s like finding another present under the tree when you thought you\'d opened them all long ago...
\"oops, there\'s another one!\"
Keep it up!
person Susan
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! Change the JK Rowling bits and get yourself to a publisher. This is by far the best(and I have loved all of your stories) of the 7. I actually have to admit to kind of liking Marcus. Cassandra is a nifty original character...I look forward to more with her. Alistar makes Lord Voldemort look like a playground bully. Really well done and I honestly have nothing to offer but praise and minor begging for an update. Thanks for a great read!
person JW
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 14 - good thing Albus is making Marcus stay in the Headmaster\'s rooms! Marcus will get to know Peeves, then, for whatever good that will do. I just hope you don\'t plan to abandon Marcus to the astral plane forever with Alastar - I have high hopes for Marcus and Cassandra (or other equally fantastic character), and I\'m woozy at the thought that Cassandra told Marcus \"IF you survive\".... Thanks for the new chapter!!
person angel
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter ... what is marcus worst fear ... please update soon and keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo!!! The suspense is killing me! What is Marcus\' greatest fear??? I kind of hope to find out! Great chapter, dearie! Happy writing! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Hugs and kisses,
Killer K
person SteffieSnape
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooo....... doesn\'t look like Marcus will be getting to class on time, eh? muahahahahahahaha! Excellentay! Hmmmmm..... I wonder who will notice he\'s missing and then come and find him? Or will he run out and scream bloody murder? hahahahahahaha!!!! I can\'t wait!!!! Evil cliffie that was!!!! It\'s just like a movie.... the audience knows something is going to happen and screams at the actor \"NO! DONT GO IN THERE! WHAT ARE YOU DOING? I SAID DONT GO IN THERE! NO NO NO!!! GO BACK! STOP! STOP! STOOOOOOOOPPPPP! NOOOOOOOOOOO! Nooooooooooooo......... you dumb dumb.....\" *shakes head*

hahahhahahahahahahahaha! Weeeellllll....... something along those lines, hahahaha! Toodles!
person Koda
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sadly, I\'m starting to like Marcus.