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for #7 ~ The Ghost and Lady Snape

by Ms_Figg

person calamitysandra
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
By now you should knuw just how much I love your work. But I have got 1 question:
Does Hermione ever eat something other then the chefs salad?

Sandra
person Addict
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back, Figgy! Was a little worried, there- it\'s not often you go so long without updating! Loved the moment between Sev and Hermione, when she can\'t sleep and he finds her awake and worn out. Can\'t wait for the next chapters!
person Prince Demitri
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not your rusual quality. You have written and done better. This is a somewhat disappointing story. I guess the hermione/snape bus can only be so interesting. Typical, typical
person Ms-Figg
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Calamity: Hermione seems to eat a lot of salad when she\'s nervous about something. But she likes Reuben sandwiches and other foods, tomato soup, shrimp and vegetables. Hamburgers and fries. Ham sandwiches with lettuce and tomato. Actually, she seems to like what I like! Imagine that.
person JW
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 15 - great way to get Peeves to behave!! Peeves should have a lot more respect for Marcus from now on. Re the pic of Marcus\' parents - I always -knew- Marcus was human! Poor nine-year-old orphan, losing both parents and going into orphanages. And I still hope Marcus and the Obeah woman (or other fantastic character) get together in one of your fics, make baby violet-eyed dragon wizards. Thanks for updating!!
person beelzebub
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finally another chapter! ooooh i wonder what befalls marcus after this fight? will there be another story all about him and cassandra? why can\'t dumbledore fight alistar? hm...all these questions and i can\'t wait for the answers!!! (if you do do a marcus/cassandra fic, i hope it\'s not too similar in plot to your ss/hg ones)
love your work.
person firewall
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How exciting! I love the repartee between the Snapes and Marcus. It adds so much life to the storyline especially when Marcus goes out of his way to irritate the pair. lol

I also like knowing the fact that the blood of the dead women are also a hold on Alistar as I couldn\'t see why it would not be.

Looking forward to your next update.
person beelzebub
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aargh...so much tension. -so that explains why dumbledore can\'t get alistar...makes sense i suppose.
i find one of the most difficult things about writing/reading hp fanfiction is that there are no real boundaries. (it\'s also one of the most liberating...) but still, not knowing the exact limits of a wizarding world can be frustrating. you seem to deal with this aspect remarkably well; a few writers bring too much of the real world into their work which tends to (but not always) diminish the \'magic\' of hp somewhat.
thanks for another great chapter.
person Koda
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter as always. ^^;
person Hypatia
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ms. Figg-

You astound, confound and enchant yur constant readers yet again.

You may be the first fanfic writer in history to use or invent the verb, \"cockblock.\" Brilliant!!!!