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Ch.19 - Ooooo.... Ilikey very muchy! Endore is a very interesting character, and sois Cassandra. I like them both. This could pose very interesting. Can\'t wait for more!! Toodles!

Leaving it up to our imaginations? That\'s an interesting strategy. =)

aargh, so many choices...lemons or plot?

my first instinct would be to go plot. we\'ve already been treated to many
lemons, and we *know* what marcus\'s night prowling is going to be like.
to avoid repetition, i say go to the astral plane. -i\'m just so curious as to
how you are going to write it.

hope that helps.

Ch.18 - Wow, I was gone for a few days and woo hoo! 4 new chapters! Ok, I don\'t really care either way if you put inmore lemons or not. Seriously, I reall\'y don\'t mind. In my opinion if you go right to the dsrinking of the potions it will get the story on the move. We all ready know how passionate Hermione and Severus are, so even if you write they had another night of passion, we\'ll understand what happened and how powerful and intense it was. I think we just need to get into the battle. It\'s been such a huge build up that we are all dying of anxiety here, gah! hahahaha! Anyways, that\'s just my opinion. But as I said, either way is fine. I don\'t think you need another entire chapter just for lemons though before the battle thing though. O, can\'t wait to see what happens! Toodles!

lol well all is well for now and all the strategies are done now the just thw to put them to work .. please update soon and keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel

Ch 17 - if the nasty critters can change their form to resemble folks familiar to Severus, Hermione, and Marcus, shouldn\'t our heroes have a password or something, so they can identify the \"real\" Severus, Hermione, and Marcus? The wizard who got \"taken\" that Peeves saw - I\'m curious if it\'s a famous wizarding history figure, and whether the truth of his fate is known in history books - or only to Peeves. This battle sounds nasty! Too bad the Obeah woman won\'t be there to help Albus - or will she.....

YR lemons R fab, but I want Alister to go down! MBE a qwk Marcus lemon? Dont really want more SS/HG, -after battle lemons would be nice though.

I actually like Endora better then Cassandra

It would be so neat if Marcus were able to find love. I love your characters!

Ch 16 - dare I hope that Hermione, Severus, and Marcus will be - gasp - FRIENDS, by the end of this adventure? Or at least less enemy-like.... Any more attacks on Muggleborns by Alastar? This is wonderful buildup to the battle - thanks for posting!!!