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Chapters 18-20 were very good Ms_Figg. I was overjoyed at looking at he story and seeing it updated. Your chapter really are like Christmas come early. Can hardly wait for the battle with Alistar. But don\'t forget the lemony goodness that keeps us all coming back looking for more. Loving it, loving it. Thank you

Ch 18 - personally, I could skip the Severus-Hermione lemons for now, as this talk was really what they needed, after Hermione\'s poor reaction to Marcus. Severus is absolutely correct in that Marcus NEEDS for S&H to be close together in the battle. I think we need to see what Marcus does tonight, as THAT is important to his emotional state in the upcoming battle. Hmm.... and what is Peeves up to tonight? Sure you can\'t bring back the Obeah or her friend for Marcus, either for tonight or the battle? Hmm, perhaps Marcus\' ancestress Fiona (or dragon?) will help him in the battle - that would be cool, as it has been a LONG time (since he was 9) that he\'s had someone truly care for him; and he could free her, if she\'s trapped.

The story is coming together nicely. But I think it would be nice to hear about Marcus and his night out. ( We already know how Severus and Hermione get down!) But, in my opinion, I think it would be better to leave off Cassandra for maybe Marcus\'s storyline ( If you do plan to do one, which would be really nice!), and have Marcus just get together with some random chick for this specific story.
Keep up the great work!

Lemons? I want a whole fruit salad. I\'m really enjoying your story. Thanks for all your hard work.

why not ... lemon is all waty good and marcus need a litte loving too .. please update soon adn keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel

I like Endora... she seems like the perfect counterpart to Cassandra. Can\'t wait to hear Cassandra\'s answer as well. Fantastic as always!

Lemons are good! It would be nice to see Marcus get together with the \'right\' woman but I know that can\'t happen yet, after what she said to him already. Severus is right- Marcus wants what they have, whether he knows it or not. Even though he\'s a creep, you\'ve got him growing on me! He is a lot like Severus, after all. I\'d like to see him redeemed and get a littlebit lighter...just a bit!
Lemons, please. I can wait for the confrontation with Alistar!
Great story~again~btw.
L

Just when I figured you were heading straight to the battle, you take a most enjoyable and intriguing sidetrip. Wonderful. Don\'t be in a hurry to finish this story...unless you have another one waiting in the wings to write for us. I need my daily fix of Figg! lol

Great story!
I relally like the Marchus chracter!
Cant wait to read what is next!

Ch 19-20 - omigosh, I *adore* these two chapters!!! I\'m glad Endora isn\'t like the one on \"Bewitched\" and very glad that Marcus recognized her, but of course an Eradicator would be good with faces and names. I was afraid Cassandra would show up when Marcus and Endora were \"together\" but if Endora says it\'s okay, then it must be okay. Marcus better be using his Transfiguration skills to make the bed more comfy.... And thanks for letting Marcus have someone to be with the night before battle, and someone who does care if he lives (besides Peeves, who wouldn\'t care in the same way). WONDERFUL way for Endora to contact Cassandra. I hope Cassandra doesn\'t demand a nasty \"service\" from Marcus, but he could handle it, I suppose. They would make amazing babies - part dragon, part Siren, etc. This can only help Severus and Hermione, and the school\'s Muggleborn students. Thank you for writing!!!