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for #7 ~ The Ghost and Lady Snape

by Ms_Figg

person tak
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another stellar chapter.
person beelzebub
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s great to have a chapter like this one in your story. it really contrasts with the lemons -making them all the more fun.
you write suspense well. almost TOO well... (remarkably jealous)
it would be great to read an original fic if you have one. your character work is great. -even if you take away the magic, you still have interesting people.

person Snapelover11
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh yeah...is right! That was so cool! Oh my, oh my...I can not wait! I am begging you to finish this one..hury hurry hurry! *lol* So very cool Fiona is going....what will Marcus do????
person Sunny
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so interesting...I love that I don\'t know what will happen next....I really like Cassandra and Endora ...very good characters....umm and I love that you post so regularly!!! Very good story you are doing a fantastic job...can\'t wait until your next update!!!
person Snapelover11
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow Ms_Figg, this is some tale ou have woven my friend! Who, but you, could create this fantasy? The details you have brought in, Endora, Cassandra, Peeves, the Astral Plane, pure perfection! The details and the bacl stories or sub plots really just show what you are made of. Not just a silly story but it even has a moral. I can not tell you how wonderful you are, but can only say that I am waiting with baited breath for the actual projection to the astral plane. I am sure, as everything else, that t will be perfect. I look forward most, to seeing Cassandra help them out and hear his explainations for it to Severus and Hermione. But, I can not help but wonder, I found myself wanting Marcus to love Endora (not sure of the spelling, sorry). I think the act of kindness he showed to her will awaken a \"new\" marcus. But....I could be wrong. Buut it helped Severus, did it not? The smart, bookish, girl won over the almost comsumed wizard and brought him a ray of sun light. Ah well...I will wait to see it for myself. But I am now a solid shipper for these two!
person firewall
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually, the meek Endora would be a fitting companion for Marcus, especially if she continues to show the spirit she did in this story. I can see Cassandra having other importance to the story...sacraficing herself in the astral plane, serving to channel the women\'s spirits, somehow being Endora....ahhh, the possibilities. hahaha! Carry on I can\'t wait.
person Snapesslave
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good so far Ms_Figg. I can\'t wait for the final battle and to see what becomes of Lord and Lady Snape, not to mention Marcus. Please update soon, the waiting keeps me on pins and needles. Alistar seems to quite the entity to be reckoned with. Keep up the fantastic writing.
person SteffieSnape
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.20 AWWW MAN!!!! I was like ok, I can do with out the lemons for now...... but now you do THAT?! GAH!!!!! HOW CAN YOU DO THIS! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! hahahahahaha...... I wanna know what happens DURING now!!!! hahahaha! i know... I\'m such a freak!!! hahahahhaa! The battle can wait... give us that fruit salad!!! hahahahhaa!! pleeeeeeeeeeease??????! Ok, update soon! Toodles!
person lilly
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lemons! Lemons! For Lemonaide! I absolutely love lemons there are very few cases of too many lemons and that is then there is no variety to the lemons. Some should be sweet others sour. A variety of lemons make the best lemonaide. Keep up the great work! Oh and I can not wait to read the next story about the woman obsessed with Severus. Rock on, Girl Friend.
person droxy
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
funchapters especially the one with dinner. Answer to your question, I want both. But if I must choose, I\'ll take the lemon.