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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the suspense is killing me. Thank you for teh frequent updates!
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! what can i say? perfect.
keep it up.
keep it up.
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Marcus he doesn\'t have anyone...awww!
Severus and Hermions are brilliant together as usual, and maybe Severus can get revenge on Alistair.. ( we hope )
Hopefully Cassandra comes to help, that would be amazing, and from this HOPEFULLY Marcus will realize that she was the love he\'s been missing all his life!
Severus and Hermions are brilliant together as usual, and maybe Severus can get revenge on Alistair.. ( we hope )
Hopefully Cassandra comes to help, that would be amazing, and from this HOPEFULLY Marcus will realize that she was the love he\'s been missing all his life!
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BORING!! and I thought you were supposed to be a GOOD writer. I give this ONE star.
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving this one as well. You\'re the only Hermione / Snape author I\'ve read since you started the first one of this series. One thing: please please please continue with the Marcus / Endora thing. It doesn\'t have to be sweet, I just really liked the dynamic between them and the way she blossomed when noticed. I mean, he remade her house, for god\'s sake.
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow ... please more more
angel
angel
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
back in form again i see. great to see another chapter so soon. very nicely written, -it\'s all getting quite complex yet you make it look effortless.
it seems marcus has another, nicer, side. interesting. i hope that Endora makes an appearance in future stories.
it seems marcus has another, nicer, side. interesting. i hope that Endora makes an appearance in future stories.
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 22-23 - very cute Marcus doll! I wonder if Endora or Cassandra can make tiny doll-size weapons for Marcus, since he doesn\'t have \"light\" on his weapon. Nice for Severus to give Marcus credit. Poor Peeves; I can understand him forgetting about the initial nakedness part, since it doesn\'t last long - not as long as death! So is the \"grandpa\" spirit now eternally gone from the plane, or can it return to attack Hermione?
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, oh Wow, oh WOW! I just read two incredible chapters. On the light side...very cool chain mail...I visualized it nicely. Go Severus! Gotta love a man who loves his sword. LOL I am reallly enjoying this story. Can\'t wait for your next update.
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SNAPELOVER: I\'ll take that single little star, thank you. I\'m not greedy. ;)