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for #7 ~ The Ghost and Lady Snape

by Ms_Figg

person WilliamSpike
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dunno. I have a tough time with the idea of Hermione allowing herself to be used as a quickie receptacle like this.
person Chavela
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7

Ooh! That was so creepy and intense! I loved it!

At first I was like staring into the screen wide eyed. Thinking OMG! this can not be happening, and of course their love would outshine any evil and I loved that it was proved!
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dun dun duun. Hermione is a lovely target. :)
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back Marcus etc.
Brr human skin book covering? :x
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brrr this presence is intriguing.
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Raeann
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are awesome! my hero... i love your stories!!!!!!! ok... done with the outburst, on to wonderful story # 8!!!!
person Cheryl
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been reading all of your stories and you never disappoint! Thanks for the quick updates - waiting is always torture! Keep the motivation!!
person Stormi
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another fantastic story!
person dword324
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
After spending last week devouring the other parts of this series of incredible fics, the hardest thing I have done in a long time was wait for this one to be finished before starting to read it. As soon as it was done I pounced on it! And let me state for the record it was well worth the agony of waiting.

You have a very real knack for combining tension, angst, humor, action, and good happy moments. You stir up the emotions putting the reader as the edge of her seat ready to climb the walls and then release the pressure with a smirk, snicker, giggle, and/or full out belly laugh. Your characterizations of Snape and Hermione are enchanting, engaging, aggravating, well rounded, multidimensional thereby making the \'real\' to the reader. Well done. You have applied this same \'realism\' to your original characters of Marcus, Cassandra, and Endora (although when I saw this name for a witch, I gave a small shudder as I flashed back to reruns of Bewitched). I find myself wanting to see more of them, to find out what happens next for them. Please if you do continue their stories, let me know.

One of the best things I can think of to say about your story is that I was sorry to see it end. I want more. I will keep an eye out for you next creative work with anticipation.

Thank you for sharing.

Donna