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by averygoodun

person Snarky4Severus
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. no! I wish that Hermione would think with her head - the foolish girl. It must hurt terribly, knowing and feeling that the woman that has Remus\'s heart can feel more pleasure than Hermione can. Hmm... I hope that Severus does a good job with her parents because they need to knock some sense into her. I am looking forward to your next chapter.
person lemonade
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Remus\' behavior is quite the mystery. He admits to Snape that he will do what he can to make Hermione fall in love with him, never to return the feelings, and then he forbids her to take on Severus as a lover. He has no qualms about anyone else sleeping with her, but the person that might make her happy and sane is off limits. Is this Remus\' bond calling for specific actions from him, or is this the selflishness of Remus himself? If the bond calls for him to make someone else sleep wiht him so that he can bond with his make vicariously, he might be innocent of the damage Hermine might be subjected to. If not, Remus is quite evil. Very interesting.
person chacha
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAHHHHHHH!!!!! *runs around screaming* i love this story so much! Remus!!! Snape!!! oh noes! Hermione! please update again soon!
person Torny
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m starting to hope that Hermione marries Lupin and they live miserably ever after. She is really getting on my nerves. For the last few chapters, I\'ve just wanted someone to slap her. I\'m looking forward to the chapter where she wakes up and starts acting like an adult. I really don\'t think she\'s looking at the long-term disadvantages of marrying Lupin because she just doesn\'t want to see them.
person Laura
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such an excellent story! Please update soon! I hope she doesn\'t marry Lupin....where does he get off telling her to never be w/ Snape after choosing him? Sheesh....I want some Hermione/Snape lemons! :-)
person moi
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very twisty. And She is being very stubborn.
person Hypatia
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
At this point, I think Hermione should marry Hagrid or Filch since bonding/congress/melding with Snape seems to be such an issue with her. Lupin should not be her husband. Fine.

No more drama, please. This has dragged on long enough. Either heat things up with Snape and ther pair make amends, or please, mercifully deliver Hagrid, Filch, Peeves, etc. to our heroine.
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I surely would like to kill you, you cruel person. SET THIS STRAIGHT THIS INSTANT! You are driving me nuts with this! This is supposed to be Hermione/SNAPE for gods sake. Would you please finally make it one? That would be appreciated! *sigh* Thanks! ;)
person Laura
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How did I miss this update?? So glad to read it but I want MORE!!! This is really an excellent story and I hope to read more soon-
L
person darkmoore
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know what? You are driving me insane with this! I want her to get Snape, dammit. You better make that happen, or I will be very upset and ... never review your story ever again.... erm... ok.... Honestly, I love the new chap and I love vulnerable Snape, can she please come to her senses now? That would be nice! Thanks!