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for Marry a Choice

by averygoodun

person lemonade
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kingsley! You WOULD do that, wouldn\'t you! I SOOOOO didn\'t expect the \"I object\" thing, which is why you used it, I\'m sure. I just kept thinking \"No, she won\'t, I know she won\'t.. I\'ll be damned, she DID!\" :D Sooo... was Snape in the portrait? Hiding and listening? Or did the portraits gossip back to him? Very funny. Now I want a sequel, because there are so many obstacles they might have to go through, it screams for more.
person Amy
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi my name is Amy, and I have an abuseve ex named Richard... love the story, but chapter 14 freaked me out!!
person angel
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ wow i love it.. severus comes to save the day ...and i love that they did and how he asked her to marry him ... wow that was great i love it and i cant wait in till your next story .. keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
person boboo
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AUGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
*runs around screaming* They\'re married! They\'re married!! YA-HA~!
Poor Remus, though. Having to be the best man at what was supposed to be his wedding.
I wouldn\'t have minded the Kingsley-tripup. ;)
Anyways, great job! I earnestly wait for more!
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story! I loved it! I also loved how you managed to keep Severus in character! It rocked! Great story!

Tiffany
person Anon
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person GeekGoddess
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful....I can\'t wait for the sequel....you really had me going....Ashwinder is down so part of me was paranoid that you had been planning to pull it and not give the Hermione/Snape ending we have been hoping for. I can\'t wait to read the epilogue and the sequel.
person sheila
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great ending!!! But of course I want more. Prologue and flooow up second shot will just have to suffice I suppose(sigh). Thanks for sharing this great work.
person Moi
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew! That was quite a frog strangler, right up to the very end. Bravo! I enjoyed it -- oh wait! There\'s an epilog? Well, it must be CHRISTMAS! Hurrah, it isn\'t over!
person Lunajen
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading this story. I do wonder though. Did Hermione sleep with Lupin, and did she protect herself?
And coud she be carrying any little cubs with her? I would like to see how the two of them get along though in another story.