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person Snapelover11
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...that was nice. I am proud of you for making Shackelbot so caring towards her. Nice job...as always....*lol*
person Anon
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting beginning
person Stormi
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1 - Nice first chapter.
person Stormi
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 - Ooohhh, aaahhh. He sure seems to be good for her.
person Stormi
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 - Well written! Onto chapter 4.
person Stormi
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 - oh yah! That was fantastic. Can\'t wait to see what you will write next. Keep up the great work!

Stormi

person Snapelover11
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey..interesting way to write this one. I must admit, I thought it would start as a bit more of a romance. Buthey...we did learn about Tonks\' rape in \"Up Agaist the Wall Wars\'. Very cool. I am interested to see the lemons these two have.