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for The Wolf and the Witch

by Procyon

person fleur
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
excellent start cant wait to see more
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story with a most excellent OC. Your portrayal of Lupin was quite convincing, and I enjoyed the story very much. I'm looking forward to the sequel to this, and I've placed this in my Recs. I was late for work because I stayed up well into the night to continue reading!

Your grammar and punctuation, as well as your use of description was perfect; not too much to read, and not to little not to leave a picture in the mind's eye. I'm very pleased to have read this wonderful piece of fiction and I look forward to reading more!

Stay Toasty!
person whodo
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was pretty good
person Kalima
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it.