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for First Feelings

by lornder

person Anon
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh My...
person Catie
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry very poorly written.
person DarkWizardKiller
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Umm...I your gonna write smut, at least pass English class first. Wasn\'t even remotely interesting or sexy or erotic. I hope you invest in a dictionary and read your grade school English primer!
person Erik Starmstyr, Angel of Innocence and Honour
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok... sorry if this sounds mean, but could you learn how to plot, write in character, and learn how to spell, before you put anything on here?
person lornder
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA I wrote this but there was no reviews :( i guess writing isnt one of my better qualities! lol o well better luck on my other ones i hope. lol