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Very nice One-shot, The true essence of a shag and run, I wonder what will happen when he wakes and has to explain to whoever why he's in the common room all exposed. Good fic keep em coming...er no pun intended.

The scenario is interesting. The rest is utter crap.

People's comments ought to come with a disclaimer that they aren't always accurate or even coherent. Some of the criticisms of your story are just plain moronic.

I actually think that you have promise as a smut writer. Not so much the plot maybe, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. PWP can be very, very good, and your sex is inspired. You just need a really good beta. There's no shame in that. Lots of us do. I depend on my beta. I LOVE my beta. Without her I would turn out nothing decent.

Lots of people take this too seriously, and lots of people are incredibly rude in their reviews, probably because they have never written anything themselves, have no life outside of fanfiction, and have an over-inflated sense of self-importance. Don't let it bother you. I enjoyed your fic. No, it wasn't perfect, but it was very enjoyable, and you have some really hot ideas. So thanks.

HAHAHAHA fell asleep on the chair... aha i\'m tired... AHAHAHAHAH on the chair how pathetic... AHAHA ... chair him sleep on. Damn i\'m thirsty to, i wonder whos gona wake up first and see harry... oviously not herm ... \"i put those ...\'s alot\" .... i\'m to tired and careless to put something else... HAHAHAHAH FEEL ASLEEP ON THE CHAIR AHAHA!! AAAAAAHHHHHHAAAAAAHHHHHHHAAAAHHHHA I like to move it move it, i like to move it move it, i like to MOVE IT.
ozzy crazy train BEYAW... good story, it seemed that herm had done it before. tho.

1Hermione would not do that
2she might but not that way
I HATE YOU YOU FUCKEN PUSSY GIVE HER A BAD NAME

so friggen good but Harry probably has a 10 inch cock

a majority on the words i had to look up in the dictionary, you illiterate prick, nice smut, bad spelling.

It has some potential, but script format isn\'t good for sex scenes. Also, you should work on your spelling, and try and make it less like a fantasy(like Hermione having huge tits) and more realistic(in reality, Emma Watson is more along the lines of a B cup).

that was pretty good :D

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