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Very well written and sad too. I really feel for Hermione. I would like to read more of this story.

this story is excellent. im an absolte fan of hr/dr and this is a great one. i hope you go on writting and update. sry the review isnt longer but i should be studying anyways... (read both chapters though i think im reviewing the first...)
btw nice job at keeping hr and dr in character. it would be nice to see more of ron and him interacting with hermione...

Amazing story. I can\'t wait for the next chapter.

are you going to keep going? this is fantastic!
Princess

Ooooh ... Awesome AWESOME beginning

OMG...your writing is absolutely incredible! I do hope you are a writer in the real world otherwise society is missing out on reading a truly talented person. Your story is wonderful, addicting, and now I am dying for more. Thanks for such an enjoyable read. Their dialogue was dead on and you could just imagine the whole scene it your head. Just simply spectacular writing...

Oh my goodness...Honestly, you\'re a really really great writer. I read something else of yours yesterday and was impressed and shocked. Nowadays, it\'s hard to find someone who really \"writes\" (no offense to others). Keep up the great work!

I saw this title listed at Dangerous Liaisons, but I hadn\'t had a chance to go read yet. I love the image of Draco as the elegant, ever-asinine older man. Also, the descriptions of Hermione\'s grooming (or lack thereof) paint a very vivid picture- one that rings very true. I SO know how she feels. It\'s a horrible feeling- you see no problem with putting off the task of getting the haircut, plucking the eyebrows, etc. in favor of more \"noble endeavors.\" At least until you\'re forced to endure the company of those that somehow manage to do all of that, all the time. We should start a support group- your Hermione and I.

The scene in Ch.2- Hermione and Draco arguing- was so moving. My heart broke for both of them. I\'ve read the storyline of Hermione being cursed barren before, but this was far more convincing and genuine. The description of her agony, and of Draco\'s as well for that matter, were very insightful. I had never considered the possibility of what a child in that situation would endure. A rotten situation for all involved.

Anyhow, I can\'t tell you how much I enjoyed these two chapters. I will be waiting with baited breath for more!

Catherine

I forgot to mention exactly how much I loved the title of the first chapter, and the idea of Dom and Lily as Romeo and Juliet. I love those lines from the Shakespeare, and I know that\'s probably trite to say (like 1st Corinthians at weddings- which I had too by the way), but it\'s true.

This fic is truly elevated- it is on a whole different plane than anything I could ever conceive of. I\'m actually torn between excitement at another wonderful story to watch for and pouting that I\'ve been reminded of my own lack of imagination.

Am I gushing slightly? I will now cease my incessant reviewing- at least for the rest of the evening.

I\'m in awe... dumbstruck really. This is one of the most original, well written and absolutely breathtaking fics I\'ve ever read. I do hope you have many more installments up your sleeve. A jewel like this must be completely unearthed. Please continue soon. I will most definately be reading!