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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice.
I have a particular penchant for suave!Draco and you write him well.
Reminiscent of snowflakeimps "uneventful story".
Harry and Ron just don't have the goods to be suave no matter how you stretch the ooc, hmm? ah well. We shall have to make due with Draco (else Blaise I suppose, but I've never found a Blaise story I really enjoyed.)
My critique: Your summary could use some work, I passed your story several times before finally reading it.
I have a particular penchant for suave!Draco and you write him well.
Reminiscent of snowflakeimps "uneventful story".
Harry and Ron just don't have the goods to be suave no matter how you stretch the ooc, hmm? ah well. We shall have to make due with Draco (else Blaise I suppose, but I've never found a Blaise story I really enjoyed.)
My critique: Your summary could use some work, I passed your story several times before finally reading it.
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this. It
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is lovely, and I can't wait for more. The dialogue had me chuckling. I also like how you haven't changed Hermione much; I see a lot of fics go on with, "And she tamed her hair into perfect fucking ringlets, started wearing make-up, and stopped being such a know-it-all!" Her thought that spending thirty minutes on grooming was criminal just seemed so Hermione to me.
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do you realize how bloody brilliant this!!! This must, for the Love of Literatiure, be continued!!!!!!!!! Please...a dying (from stress) girl's request!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Looks damn good to me (the plot) so please have mercy on us (the readers) and update!!!!
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this is too good for mere words. I like the theme of an older and slightly more mature Draco and Hermione. Brilliant idea!
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just wanted to know if their is going to be any more updates.
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Better and better, like a small private universe were every detail feels just right. Lovely.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oohh ... *sighs* Wonderful so far! I loved their verbal sparring, especially in chapter 2 (with a drunken Malfoy). Besides, it's so interesting to see them 20 years or so in the future. Malfoy grey? Dom Malfoy marrying Lily Potter? VERY interesting! I really love this story so far and I hope to read more soon. I'll be waiting. ^-^
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update update update. waiting for an update