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interesting idea. suggest you get a beta to help with proofreading, errors in spelling, etc. detract from the story. can the partner hear harry\'s thoughts or not? hmmm... cant wait to hear what draco is thinking when he and harry get together!

This is something kinda new, its an interesting idea and an interesting take a harry, i hope you write more.

harry\'s a hoe. I wonder if draco knew that the potion would end up that way... he is too meticulous to have missed the ingredient opps and he was the one that manipulated snape into having harry take it. I wonder if harry gets such a good reputation that the slytherin sex god gets curious and comes to investigate....smirk... enjoying the story! lookin forward ot an update.