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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i haven\'t reviewed in a long time but i have been reading!! i love this chapter!! you are really good at foreshadowing and other stuff...i can\'t wait what is gonna happen!! yes smut is coming!!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Draco and Harry coming together soon! I really love how you\'ve brought it full circle and I can\'t wait to read more! You update super fast but I think you\'d have to update once an hour to keep me satisfied.
You\'re doing a great job of keeping Harry in character, but unfortunately that means I want to shake the crap out of him and yell \"HE LOVES YOU! HE TAUGHT YOU HOW TO DO THE SHIELD YOU SILLY SILLY BOY! WHY WOULD HE TEACH YOU HOW TO DO THE SHIELD IF HE DIDN\'T WANT YOU TO USE IT! GAAAAAAAAAAAH!\" and that would probably be child abuse.
Sorry about that. It\'s just that Harry can be pretty oblivious sometimes. I swear, some day I\'m going to write a story and I\'m going to put myself in as the world\'s craziest Mary Sue and all she\'s going to do all day is walk around yelling things like \"Ron, Hermione loves you, get together already\" and \"Harry, don\'t keep secrets from your friends. They always find out and then you and Ron fight and then he forgives you because your his best mate and then....\" DEEP BREATH.
Wow. It\'s late. That\'s my only excuse for this craziness. I\'m loving the story, I\'m loving both Harry and Draco, I\'m loving the first few chapters even more now that I know what is going on, and I hope you update soon!
~Tatem
You\'re doing a great job of keeping Harry in character, but unfortunately that means I want to shake the crap out of him and yell \"HE LOVES YOU! HE TAUGHT YOU HOW TO DO THE SHIELD YOU SILLY SILLY BOY! WHY WOULD HE TEACH YOU HOW TO DO THE SHIELD IF HE DIDN\'T WANT YOU TO USE IT! GAAAAAAAAAAAH!\" and that would probably be child abuse.
Sorry about that. It\'s just that Harry can be pretty oblivious sometimes. I swear, some day I\'m going to write a story and I\'m going to put myself in as the world\'s craziest Mary Sue and all she\'s going to do all day is walk around yelling things like \"Ron, Hermione loves you, get together already\" and \"Harry, don\'t keep secrets from your friends. They always find out and then you and Ron fight and then he forgives you because your his best mate and then....\" DEEP BREATH.
Wow. It\'s late. That\'s my only excuse for this craziness. I\'m loving the story, I\'m loving both Harry and Draco, I\'m loving the first few chapters even more now that I know what is going on, and I hope you update soon!
~Tatem
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter....=D
Thnx for updating so fast....i can\'t wait for the *smut* -_~
<3 <3
Thnx for updating so fast....i can\'t wait for the *smut* -_~
<3 <3
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 33! Will Severus, Blaise and Draco show up for Christmas? More please!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank You!!!! Please keep writing!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter again^^ keep it up I will wait for the next update...
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jethro Tull and Tori Amos, ha! Influences, I assume? Rock on!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I\'m absolutely stunned! I only just noticed this fic (Don’t know how I missed it) when I was browsing today, and even from the first chapter it completely gripped me!
So I sat down (for maybe a part of 12 hours, non-stop) and read every single chapter from start to finish (of what you\'ve put up so far) and all I can say is that I am completely amazed. This fic is absolutely fucking brilliant! I\'ve never been stuck for words on reviewing a fic before (and have never swore in one either!), I just really can\'t believe how brilliantly written this is.
Your writing style has to be the best I\'ve seen, seriously! There\'s no mistakes from what I could see (I am a beta tester myself, but I can\'t guarantee I was looking very hard because I was way too engrossed in this fic), your grammar is brilliant, your spelling is a great relief (British, thank you!!!!), and everything about this is just so perfect; paragraphs, speech, thoughts, everything is flawless.
The plot is amazing... I think it can rival actual published books, and maybe even the Harry Potter books themselves in some ways! You definitely match J. K. Rowling\'s quality! The plot is incredibly gripping, which manages to output so much, yet so little at the same time because nothing, in terms of Harry and Draco\'s relationship, has actually happened yet! The entire fic so far (apart from the first chapter) is merely a flashback of what\'s happened BEFORE this fic even begins! This is absolute genius! You seem to manage to have something going on with the plot throughout the entire part of every single chapter. I can\'t say there was a single moment in that fic that wasn\'t gripping me!
I have to say, you\'ve really had my emotions going through this whole fic - I have never been immersed so far before EVER, and it really feels that I can relate to this as though it\'s real, and not just some thing I\'m reading. You also are so incredibly creative as well - you have invented so many things in this fic that I think is fantastic, like the bubble spell used in the DADA lessons.
You have my full credit with this; you are an absolute brilliant writer who really deserves so much for writing such a fantastic thing. Thank you so much for sharing such a brilliant piece of work - you have my full support, and I\'d rate it 10 stars if I was capable of, and even more! It’s been an honour reading this.
I am very much looking forward to the next chapter, so please update soon!
All the very best,
Diabolus
So I sat down (for maybe a part of 12 hours, non-stop) and read every single chapter from start to finish (of what you\'ve put up so far) and all I can say is that I am completely amazed. This fic is absolutely fucking brilliant! I\'ve never been stuck for words on reviewing a fic before (and have never swore in one either!), I just really can\'t believe how brilliantly written this is.
Your writing style has to be the best I\'ve seen, seriously! There\'s no mistakes from what I could see (I am a beta tester myself, but I can\'t guarantee I was looking very hard because I was way too engrossed in this fic), your grammar is brilliant, your spelling is a great relief (British, thank you!!!!), and everything about this is just so perfect; paragraphs, speech, thoughts, everything is flawless.
The plot is amazing... I think it can rival actual published books, and maybe even the Harry Potter books themselves in some ways! You definitely match J. K. Rowling\'s quality! The plot is incredibly gripping, which manages to output so much, yet so little at the same time because nothing, in terms of Harry and Draco\'s relationship, has actually happened yet! The entire fic so far (apart from the first chapter) is merely a flashback of what\'s happened BEFORE this fic even begins! This is absolute genius! You seem to manage to have something going on with the plot throughout the entire part of every single chapter. I can\'t say there was a single moment in that fic that wasn\'t gripping me!
I have to say, you\'ve really had my emotions going through this whole fic - I have never been immersed so far before EVER, and it really feels that I can relate to this as though it\'s real, and not just some thing I\'m reading. You also are so incredibly creative as well - you have invented so many things in this fic that I think is fantastic, like the bubble spell used in the DADA lessons.
You have my full credit with this; you are an absolute brilliant writer who really deserves so much for writing such a fantastic thing. Thank you so much for sharing such a brilliant piece of work - you have my full support, and I\'d rate it 10 stars if I was capable of, and even more! It’s been an honour reading this.
I am very much looking forward to the next chapter, so please update soon!
All the very best,
Diabolus
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the best stories in fanfiction... period... it is like jk rowling is writing it.... Please keep going and if u have time let me know of all the storeies that you have written
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
once again another excellent chapter, now i really can\'t wait for Draco and Harry to get on with some hot action...lol