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how can you leave there!! now you must make some kind hot scen in the next chapter or else!!....i won\'t review!!! or read your story!!....just kidding ^^ i couldn\'t resist not reading your story but sometimes i\'m not in the mood to review so yeah...update soon!

Awesome! Brilliant! Amazing! Fantastic! Orgasmic! OMFGosh! This is so wonderful. I seriously almost cried from relief at the end. I am so totally emotionally invested in your story and this chapter was amazing! It was exactly what I had hoped for! Thanks so much! Update soon!

i know i repeat myself but i loooooooooooove vou and your story. The only reason i go to school eath day is because i can use the internet and can read. Thank you soo much for this story.

P.S. I was reading through some of the other reviews that the other reader had posted, and I came across this really smart reader (this is going to bug me I cant remember who she is!) this reader made the comment about how there were a bunch of reader who thought that our lovely writer, had messed up and posted a copy of a previous posting. I wanted to make a comment a say that I new that it wasn

Diaboulus is the reviewer that I admire, your such a quick wit.

Chapter 36 please! They kiss! What happens next?

I can\'t believe you left it at such a cliff hanger!!! OMG! I\'ve been waiting for that to happen through the entire story, and you go and stop just as they do! You\'re so evil, yet so good as well!

Great chapter as always. I was a slight bit confused to begin with, but it made sense as soon as they got back to Hogwarts. I\'m really glad they sorted everything out - you did the scene brilliantly. How many people thought chapter 34 was a repeat then? I knew it wasn\'t! I could tell every modification in it, and how the little change really made all the difference between understanding it in the first place, and then understanding it after you\'ve read up to that point.

Brilliant! Can\'t wait for the next one. Keep up the great work.

Chapter 35 please!

Heya, I love the story. Just have one comment on ur overall writing. ur idea is great but i found that ur first few chaps were confusing in that it\'s hard to keep track of the time jumping. another thing, in this last chap, obviously, it is going over events that u already described in an earlier chap. it\'s kinda repetitive. i can\'t really remember exactly when harry started to flashback to the events of the summer and fall term but maybe where ur now going over the same events in this chap u should have him come back to himself (I mean the harry who\'s looking back on this part of the story). i don\'t know if this make any sense or not but it\'s what i found to be the only thing u need to work on to improve the story, constructive criticism. Besides that though the story\'s great and i love it. keep it up.

CHEERS!

Wow. This story is truly amazing. I\'ve been reading it all week, but didn\'t want to review till I had caught up. I am totally in LOVE with the story. You have a great plot, plus delicious bits of smuttyness thrown in there to keep us wanting more. I can\'t wait to see what happens when they get back to Hogwarts. And especially when Harry finds out Draco sent the pnedent and note. Mrow. Good times. Keep writing, I can\'t wait to see more!!