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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent piece
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really well done!!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I think that you gave Lucius a great view and i loved how it was short and sweet.
thanks
thanks
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Simply Amazing..(in a good way of course!)
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How wonderful! Great writing! I\'m off now to see if you have more stories.
BYE!
BYE!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I loved the twist. It was beautifully written... It shows that even the most evil have a choice of how their lives can turn out. Maybe you should make this a little bit longer...
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww that was so sweeet!!! great story!!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG Wow! This was really great! The flashbacks and other styles of writing you incorporated in this wonderful story were really very powerful and had a very great effect on me! I really hope you continue writing, because I think it\'s absolutely flawless..except for a few spelling errors...BUT THAT CAN BE FIXED! ^^
Great work! Keep it up!
Great work! Keep it up!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it there is a tear of happiness running down my cheek, lovely just lovely! good job :)
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story.
Did you post this somewhere else?
I remember reading this somewhere else.
Did you post this somewhere else?
I remember reading this somewhere else.