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for Walking in Hell

by erin03

person deb
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
brillant, oh hope he doesnt get freed lol i know its horrible i like when Harry is submittive im going to enjoy reading this i hope its updated, cant wait till it starts totally i will enjoy it all! i hope Draco trys somthing and Severus nearly kills him for it, make Sev posessive, i\'d also like Snape to make harry take a ashrophic potion or how ever you spell it. make him like it (Not his first time tho maybe when he cant get a reaction from him) update soon lol its looking great!
person sara
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your fiction is great i hope he is not rescued not that i want to see the dark lord win acutally i do. but once voldi one maybe he is not that bad once he has control. i like how he cant do magic. hehe he is stuck even if he gets a wand good one. i like Harry/Severus D/s storys cant wait to here more good luck and good bye also update soon
person Saske
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think i m not quite sure where you are gonna go with this so i will defininetly be tuning in to see if its one of those where snape gonna treat him like an equal but prisoner or if he is gonna do the humiliate potter thing or if he\'s got a plan to free him cuz he\'s secretly in love with him deal or... so many possibilities... humm wonder how draco will factor in too.... anyway it\'s good so far and i\'m glad harry has some fire I hate the fics where he\'s like super uke and whimpers alot glad he told the mirror to fuck off at least cuz it\'s always more fun when him and snape get a witty arguement goin on.
person Neko Miu
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a good start, I hope you continue
person Tamura
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that\'s mean. that\'s really really harsh. poor harry, he\'s really gonna be put through the wringer. i love the conversation between snape and draco, with harry\'s little side comments. it was well done. now then: go write more! go go go go!
person Kat Potter
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it, it\'s interesting plz continue
person Hambares
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I want to read more! Looks good, even though I don\'t know where this is going yet!
person Anon
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I believe you have a good beginning to start with. I hope to see some more real soon.