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for Walking in Hell

by erin03

person Rainien
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful start! Can\'t wait for more.
person TyRisha
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome. i mean, not how snape\'s acting - he\'s just being a right bastard. but the way you wrote it - wow. i love it. and i don\'t understand why when i wrote my original review it didn\'t come up. *shrugs* oh well.
person Meg
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is great so far I can\'t wait for you to update this!! YAY!!! You\'ll write more, right??? PLEASE!! Keep up the awesome work~!!!!!
person kagome
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow,great first two chaps.can\'t wait to see what happens to Harry while in snapes care(Ha...Ha..care yeah right)anyway looking forward to the next chap.
person Pepp
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Drools* I really love the dominating stuff ^^\'\'lol BUt I feel bad for Harry.. I really love Severus/Harry pairings^^ And i really lie this so far, and hope the next chapter is just as good, if not a little longer (I love the story too much for it to just end when the gettings good ^^lol)


Was that was the potion was? A potion form of the Imperious curse? Or was it something else? (wat I dont know, but...)

And Severus was so mean hitting Harry! *sniffles*
person deb
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! great chapter im so glad u updated! hehe! u are good
person myniephoenix
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fantastic update... do it again soon... you had me gasping at the end.. i can\'t wait to hear all about it.. :)
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Like your evil Snape and tortured Harry. Keep it up.
person Hambares
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Snape is cruel. He said two words. Harry gave him two words and Snape wanted more! Harry is in real trouble here.
person Chloe the Grey
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that you\'ve got a good start. I\'d like to find out what will happen next. I\'m wondering if Dumbledore is really alive and if so, how. Will this contain non-con? I can\'t imagine that Harry would be willing.