rate_review Reviews

Hi!
It looks great. I can\'t wait to read more of this.
I love X-Men, and usually, I love crossovers, so I\'m really looking forward to this story.
Update soon.

This is ok, so far. It\'s kind of weird that you mixed X-men and HP, but it seems interesting so far.

This is an interesting crossover. I trust there will be some explaination later as to how albus and xavier know each other? Overall, a good story, especially the characterization of logan. But, please, pay more attention to spelling and grammer, as they can take away from a good story. For example, the names. the correct names of some of the characters are Ororo and Lucius, not aurora and lucious (which means yummy - not something I personally would associate with the elder malfoy). Also, some words are left out of the sentence - such as \"head\" instead of \"he had\". Any easy thing to have happen, I do it all the time. I am really not trying to be an anal retentive nit-picker, and this is NOT a flame. I just love the concept and the story is very good so far. Just thought it would help. Anyway, picking nits aside, I really have enjoyed this story so far, and hope you keep up the good work and update soon!