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by slytherinside

schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see what the next punishment would be...more please...
person glasswalker
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read this a few months ago already and can't remember if I left you a review. Just to be sure, here is another one:
BRILLIANT! I LOVE IT! This was so HOT!!!! And I think you captured Severus exactly the way I love him! My favourite Sev! You did it!
*cookies for the author!*
*freakout*
person Rakina
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed that very much. It wasn\'t too predictable at all, it was just lovely.
The enthusiasm of Severus was good, especially when he asks Harry to sit in his lap and kiss him at the end. Very sweet.
Will you write the punishment? I would enjoy it, I\'m sure.
person Trisana
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES, YES, YES, YES, YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Next Day! Next Day!! ppppppppppllllllllllllleeeeeeeeaaassssssssseee
person Chys
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wait, now that he knows about it, or perhaps, we know, does it make a difference if Harry follows instructions or not, I mean, will he be damned if he does and damned if he don't? Very interesting!

I want to see more!
person carol
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just loved it. I would simply adore you if you were to add another chapter or two. I think it is great that you got Hermione and Ron in on the plot to get Severus and Harry together.

Carol
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU very much. Very beautiful love story. :D
person n0b0dys_ang31
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooohhhh... write the next one! PLEASE!!! damn, that was HOT!! *Fans herself*
person Cindy
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, please continue with the next lesson. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Nova
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, this was such a cute one! They were perfect! Another chapter would be fun too:)