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for Desire

by PinkIce

person firewall
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahahaha, keep telling yourself that Lucius...she\'s wrapped around your finger...sure.
person littlecoporal
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I very much enjoyed reading ur story, I luv the pairing and the way u wrote L and H
was great .

I hope u write some more soon .
Luv jo
person lemonade
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He\'s a bad, bad man!! lol. Is it Draco, transformed into something, that keeps biting him? Maybe an angry Narcissa? Disgruntled house elves? He\'s very canony in his slipperyness. You\'ve done a great job capturing his evil sly slytherin personality.
person firewall
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. You are keeping me speculating about where you are going with this. Well done.
person angel
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm i hope he dose not hurt/just use her .... and i cant wait in till then next chapter soooo please more soon and in till the keep up ther great work and later for now

angel
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job! I am enjoying this story! Welcome to the ranks! As a fellow Lucius/Hermione shipper, I must say that there are not enough of that ship out there! I am glad you are writing one! Doing a fantastic job! I am looking forward to seeing what happens next!
person michelle
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whaooooooooooooo! wicked story. keep updating and writing.
person mary
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person firewall
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha Love the two of them annoying each other. Looking forward to chapter 3.
person michelle
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool fic.