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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Draco's finally doing something, I hope next Friday will be there soon so I'll know what he's planning.
BTW, as far as I know, Pansy has black hair. It is said somewhere in the books, I guess, and they took a black-haired girl for her film version.
All in all, I love the idea of this fic, but every now and then I think you should have someone beta it. There are no big mistakes, really, just these little things one tends to overlook in one's own text. And though I like the style this is written in I can't stop being irritated by your using of the names very often (too often for my taste) in thr descriptions of situations. I hope this will help you in your further writing - and I do hope you'll keep on doing this, I love your stories!
BTW, as far as I know, Pansy has black hair. It is said somewhere in the books, I guess, and they took a black-haired girl for her film version.
All in all, I love the idea of this fic, but every now and then I think you should have someone beta it. There are no big mistakes, really, just these little things one tends to overlook in one's own text. And though I like the style this is written in I can't stop being irritated by your using of the names very often (too often for my taste) in thr descriptions of situations. I hope this will help you in your further writing - and I do hope you'll keep on doing this, I love your stories!
schedule
January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww one more chapter left. Its going to be sad.
schedule
January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh,I love Draco this way ^_^ But where is Blaise&Seamus? Me wants Blaise&Seamus!!!
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Harry, Quote on quote i hate waiting. I love this story. Yes it is sad that there is only one more chapter to go but good at the same time. You can start another one. Smiles brightly at you! Your a great writer. And this story is great. well I can't wait till next friday! i'll be lucky if i go that long with out re reading your story. Well i hope you had a great week!!
peace
Shadowy
peace
Shadowy
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
noooo not only 1 i will cry
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"I hate waiting."
SAME APLYS TO THIS STORY!
I really want to read it! I so hate waiting for it! I want more hp/dm love!
SAME APLYS TO THIS STORY!
I really want to read it! I so hate waiting for it! I want more hp/dm love!
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Harry, I hate waiting!
Can't wait for your next update! Have you abandoned your other stories too? Coersion and Confusion is one of my faves!!
Haha, I want to know what Draco is going to do next!!!!!!!!!
*on the edge of her seat**
Can't wait for your next update! Have you abandoned your other stories too? Coersion and Confusion is one of my faves!!
Haha, I want to know what Draco is going to do next!!!!!!!!!
*on the edge of her seat**
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is so good! but there cant just be one more chapter that has to at least be an epilogue! come on!
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Only one left?! O.o *cries self to sleep*
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What...? Just one chapter! You've gotta be joking! T_T
I don't want this fic to end, no! Never!
But please, if you really are going to post the last chap next week, make Draco tell Harry he loves him!
Please! They belong together! *puppyeyes*
And thankyou so much for this fic, it's been awesome to read it! <3
Chi
I don't want this fic to end, no! Never!
But please, if you really are going to post the last chap next week, make Draco tell Harry he loves him!
Please! They belong together! *puppyeyes*
And thankyou so much for this fic, it's been awesome to read it! <3
Chi