rate_review Reviews

Can't you update on a saturday?! I want to know more!!!!!!!!
........T_T..........

I cannot believe you left me hanging like that! And it going to be a week till i kno what happens!!! Im soo mad! but at the same time I'm so happy! Finally the scene we've all been waiting for is gonna happen; the confession! i cant wait, i just hope that you dont drag out the next chapter so i have to wait 2 weeks! i love this fic!!!

This is so cool! I like Harry taking control of the situation. ^^ And give us moooooore!

I almost thought something had happened, and this chap wouldn't be here because of the date... ^^'
This is envolving, lots! Draco should tell, he should tell! *pout*
And Harry should answer!

'Nother cute chapter. Little short, but nothing really happened I guess... Oh dear, oh dear... Draco and Harry are finally starting to understand each other. The prat reminds me of my boyfriend sometimes... Only it's She. "So she knows I love her, so? I don't have to do anything"... Well, I got him over that little phase and we're happy. O.o;; Sorry, I just rambled... Anyway, can't wait 'til Friday, exams are over, and I'm happy. Can't wait to see what Draco does. Bye bye now.

Go Pansy! Harry underestimated her! Good thing she wants Draco to be happy! So what does Draco do now? Can't wait for chapter 16!

I love it!

the only thing that bugged me is pansy has black hair :P

and im werido like that ^^ :*

got to go, loooking foward to more updates!

xx-Kari-xx

You know this is brilliant, right? Harry's on the verge of being in Slytherin for this. Ron, of course, has to be the ultimate lummox. Hermione isn't as overbearingly annoying as she is in other fics. This is great. And lemon!!!! All stories should have a twist of lemon. Thank you for writing this....now hurry up and post the next chapter!!!!!!!

It was ok. I think I had a problem with not enough description. Yes. I also had a problem with how you made them speak, I just can't see them fitting their characters. I hope this somehow helps you. It's just one moment Harry was back against the wall, then suddenly Draco was pushing himself into him. I am a gay male myself, and I think you're a female, unsure, but your username "roxierose" kinda makes me think girl. I know this sounds bad, but I have a problem with females writing gay slash/fanfiction between males. Because usually the girls write or draw each character as if they are taking estrogen, or in fact girls in boys' bodies. I have nothing against you of course, I'm trying to help... also when they came. I noticed Harry and "Draco was not too far behind" but... you should have went on to explain when he did, not just left it at that. Climaxing is a very nice feeling and it should all honestly get a paragraph on it's own for both members, if not each getting their own paragraph for their climax's.

I hope this critisizm can help you to get better. ^_^

OMG!!! I heart this storry so much! Can't wait till next review. You write so well! I want to find out so bad What'll happen to Harry cause of the "dream" Can't wait till Friday the 13th!