AFF Fiction Portal
person Sinful
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't get me wrong I am a Snape fan all the way but this story is good so far. Keep it going. I love the way she just got up off the bed and left him like that. It was funny as hell becasue I could see myself doing it only it oh so would be much harder for me to do it. Can't wait to read more.
person Rodger
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful character and amazing writing, please update soon, I'd love to read more!
person Essie
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful writing! I really hope you keep up with this story. Your characters are wonderful, and I really enjoy your writing.
person Weird Sister
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. I like the character Arual, i think it is someone every girl could find something to relate to. For Snape, it is exactly how I see him and like him, for the matter of fact. I hope you\'ll keep writing and i can\'t wait for part two.
person charity
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now this sounds like a story that I am going to enjoy!!! I love the two characters and how you chose to introduce them. I am anxiously waiting for the next chapter. Please hurry, I don\'t know how long I can hold my breath.
person Jane
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent! I love the tension and the boldness of your original character!

I\'ll be eagerly awaiting your next installment :o)
person sa1boy
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love original fiction. This may not be everyones bag. But who cares. I liked it. Well done, good stuff