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June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
sweet stuff
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot! But it really bothered me that Ginny asked Hermione to stop twice, and Hermione ignored her.
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm not gonna lie i'm just a horny fuck for the most part, but i do enjoy a little story buildup.
perhaps if you described the scene where ginny's whimpering in fear, tossing and turning and herm just holds her and makes it all better....
also, herm spends a lot of time talking about ginny's perfect arse but does nothing with it when the time's right. if you're not afraid to go for a little analplay, go for it. it would fit perfectly into the story
perhaps if you described the scene where ginny's whimpering in fear, tossing and turning and herm just holds her and makes it all better....
also, herm spends a lot of time talking about ginny's perfect arse but does nothing with it when the time's right. if you're not afraid to go for a little analplay, go for it. it would fit perfectly into the story
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ROCKED MY SOCKS!
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm.
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this. I'm not familiar with femslash but I thought it was great. The only issue I had with it was when Hermione wouldn't stop when Ginny asked. I'm not really into that. But its still a great story/PWP. However you want to put it
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice! quick and easy smut.
could use some more describtion,
but more importantly, tell
the story more slowly,
make sure someone slowly gets
into the action,
anyway, hope this helps :)
could use some more describtion,
but more importantly, tell
the story more slowly,
make sure someone slowly gets
into the action,
anyway, hope this helps :)
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it im all wet now! that was hot!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was soooo hot