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for legatum de maladie

by Idamonae

person Rena
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Read Answers\'s review, was very surprised, to say the least. It seems like she doesn\'t see the difference between Jesus and Lucius! The Necromancy isn\'t about the resurrection, it\'s about the animation of the dead bodies, thus, Draco simply can\'t be anything, but a walking corpse. I agree, you described Draco\'s condition in the most sickening way, but, in this case, it\'s a praising! Draco is what he is, quite unnatural thing, and such a thing just can\'t be beautiful or attractive! It simply can\'t be normal!
BTW, about Draco^_~:

*Apparently, he was not only sterile, but completely impotent.*

Ew-w-w... And if Harry could be sexually interested in such a thing, he should be locked as a dangerous pervert!^_~

*There were few signs that he would ever undergo a full transition into sexual adulthood, as even at the age of sixteen, he had very little body hair*

Well... You know, I\'m not sure, that hairy as an Australian silky terrier Draco is such a good thing...^_~

*and the last medical examination had shown no signs of his testicles ever dropping.*

*being naughty* Well, about medical examinations... I suppose, Harry, being Draco\'s personal healer, would need to do it quite frequently... Of course, purely for the *progress monitoring* sake!^_~

* For a boy his age, he stood at a meager 5
person Saske\'s Iris
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Harry and Draco get to interact soon. I already feel sorry for Draco though, sheesh he\'s a corpse. Necrophilia doesn\'t do it for me, so i hope this story doesn\'t swing too much into that area... anyway, I like the character you gave harry and seeing his family dynamics is fun too. Hummm lucius is quite the bastard isn\'t he, really got harry good with that contract. Curiousity is all sturred up can\'t wait for an update!
person NightShade
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting! I suppose Lucius SHOULD explain to Harry what \"creature\" Draco is - Harry would have much bigger chance to find a cure then... I suppose Lucius love Draco - if not, why would he try to keep alive a sterile, \"defective\" son, who is not able to produce heir? I like your story.
person Rena
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, NightShade\'s review remined me!...
Personally, I think, that the story about Narcissa, who hasn\'t been able to conceive, is a total rubbish. I guess, that, facing the perspective to die being a heirless, Lucius would just kill his wife (because a divorce isn\'t acceptable for the high society family), re-marry and sire at list two healthy children. So, I strongly suspect, that Lucius is the one who is unable to procreate.
person Aisling
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry is SCREWED!! LOl :D :D more soon huni cya later xxx
person Rena
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry isn\'t stupid or ignorant and, eventually, he would understand, what kind of abomination Draco is. And then...
His Griffindor\'s tendencies are too strong, he could decide, that such a terrible thing shouldn\'t polute the Earth and not to do anything to save Draco (and I\'m sure, by this time he would work out, that the loophole in the contract allows this).
I suppose, Draco would live only if, by the Halloween, Harry would see him as a person, whose body is, unfortunately, dead, and not just a walking corpse. But they have only two weeks! And Draco isn\'t that likeable person (even Severus thinks, that Draco is bratty, and, considering, this coming from the Head of the Slytherin about the Slytherin\'s seeker and his friend\'s child... Let\'s safely assume, that Draco is far from being an angel). I\'m afraid, it would take a miracle to produce some solid proof to Harry, that Draco is worth saving...
If his thoughts from Lucius\' office at Malfoy Manor about the child, who
person thrnbrooke
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How can Harry even hope to cure Draco when he doesn\'t know the truth? Stupid Lucius. And stupid Harry for not reading the full contract! He\'s a Slytherin and Harry didn\'t read it all! Can\'t wait for chapter 6!
person BitchOfDarkness
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! The chapter was great, I really loved it. What is the title supposed to mean? Maybe I can help out.
person amy
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for more. This fic is so interesting.
person Rena
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is an idiot! Was it too difficult to make a contract, which would prevent Harry from telling anything to anyone about Draco\'s condition?! But no-o-o, he preferred to save his face, without thinking, that the healing spells are working only for the living beings, and trying to perform them on the corpse is completely useless!
Of course, such spells and Harry\'s healing skills would be more than necessary after the Halloween (if Draco survived), because it would take a lot of knowlege and patience to turn this ... underdeveloped thing, which Draco is for now, into the normal young man (Honestly, we don\'t expect, that it would happen like this: Halloween. Midnight. O-o-ps! Completely healthy Draco!). But now, now Harry needs the spells for tieing down the souls to the animated *objects*, so, I have no a clue, how he possibly could to side-step the Necromancy!