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for Broken Dreams

by moreyel

person dracoismysexgod
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is so sad! great job...i love how you describe draco's feelings
person Becca
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was fantastic.
person moonjameskitten
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh ! one-shot fiction ?...wow ! that is powerful ! simple. Clear. I love Draco 's determination and courage. He's beautiful.
Absolutly sad but beautiful.
You did a great work !
person Di
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah .. pretty cool, not as angsty as I had imagined it but that was what made it better to me :) .. and the smirk at the end .. great job ;)

Di
person Bek Allen
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries*...

Take it back! Please just take it all back!...

This was a wonderful story, you had me on the edge of my seat, thinking Draco and \'Mione were going to have a happy ending that resulted in little bouncing baby Draco\'s and \'Mione\'s... But to... gosh damn my heart all but stopped.

A brilliant piece of work. Keep writing no matter what.

Bek
person julie
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think your story was great. the ending was done wonderfully. i really like the idea of draco doing something so caring even though he was a death eater. its also very nice to think of him and hermione together in an afterlife...aw. nice job. keep it up.
person sassyspicegurrl
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i don\'t want to flame, but that was soooo sad! i hated it! nothing personal, liked the writing, but i didn\'t like the storyline. way to sad. no smut. ;D keep writing, though.
person Marigold (NOT LOGGED IN AND TOO LAZY, SORRY)
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My, my, you make it very belivable, LOVE IT. And your favorite list has some of the stories I\'ve been looking for quite a while. Ah, I\'m listening to a very sad piano version of a song. Very sad, and best part is, since it\'s on the web and looped, there are no visable stops because the whole song as the same theme, perfect.

Very, both this story and the song, and together, they were made to be.
person rickety
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice.
person kate
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow.
shivers and tears, baby.