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That was so sweet. I wish it was a bit more developed though, which means I want to see more. ^_^ very sweet I loved it.

This had and unexpected happy ending--very pleasing to read. Thanks for the post!

I like this as a stand alone piece. I see how you could develop it into a longer story but it is more powerful as a one-shot. Thanks for sharing.

I think it was very moving! Choices for Lucius. Hermione looking in the mirror. Draco and Hermione being married. Wondering if he would make the merciful choice or not. Well done, you.

I only have one word to say and that is WOW! Very good story any chance you can continue it some. It can become more than a one shot. You have so many plot possibilites with this.

The concept of an epiphany causing Lucius to alter the entire course of his life is nicely wrought through a series of flashbacks that aren\'t his. And I like very much the idea that you\'ve expressed his entire transitional arc with the use of two words, It and Hermione. Nicely done.

Just a little concrit, Lala, this story would be incrementally better received if you\'d give it a once over for mis-spelled words and some grammatical inconsistencies (e.g., it\'s Crucio without an \'s\', and \'now instead of \'know\'). It\'s too good an idea not to do it justice.

I\'ll look forward to seeing what else you write.

Very nicely done. It wasn\'t quite what I was expecting, but it was good. Although, I think you should move it into the Hermione/Draco pairing... even though it is told through Lucius\' point of view, the pairing isn\'t between him and Hermione. I liked it. Good story. Very sentimental.

Great story. It was nice to see him portrayed this way. While I believe Lucius to be a hard ass when it comes to his son, I don\'t believe that there is no love there. I think he loves his son, and would do anything to keep him happy.

wow. i love it. I hope you do one with lucius and hermione together, not that i love draco and hermione, infact they are my favorite pair along with Lucius Malfoy and Hermione.

I think you should continue it - it has great potential for a longer story!