AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Forbidden

by rubycrush

person KryssXXX
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
noo!! end of chapter...damn... very nice... uhhh, what else should i type? uhh, update ASAP!!!!
person Willow Ann Rover
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Happy Thanksgiving! I hope you had a great holiday. What\'s going on with updates? You usually update every other day or so... it\'s been forever! ...more like a little over a week... but still! I\'m DYING for the next chapter! please please please please PLEASE update soon! Happy Holidays!

xoxoxo,
Willow Ann
person Kai
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*fans herself* Oh my god, Minks....this story is so unbelievably hot!
I need to leave my computer for some, ahem, \'self-love\'! I reeeally want to see Harry
make Draco beg, like Draco did to Harry in the Forbidden Forest!
My aim is ElfenPrncss please IM me!!!!!!
*gives you mountains of hot fudge brownie sundaes*
LOVE YA!!!!!
Kai
person HinLover
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! No wonder you\'re one of my fav writers! My Cheeks were tingling the entire time I was reading! Man I wish could write happy scenes so good that people\'s cheeks (the ones on their faces mind you) tingled! I also wish I could make then love he characters ad dry and stuff.....of course Ido better with my own chaacters that I make up...not with characters other people allready own......WELL HOT DAMN AND SPILL MY SKILLET! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!! PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!! Thank you.
person songbird
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi.
I just read the whole of 20 chapters in two days time... though I don\'t have much time :)
I love this story, it\'s absolutely adorable.
Thak god, draco and harry are back together. I couldn\'t bear the thought of both of them being ao unhappy.
I had liked to kill Pansy with her own curse! The woman is sooo crazy, stealing herself into draco\'s bed at night... She should never come out of St Mungo\'s again \'cause she\'s a crazy slut!

No I\'m very excited of chapter 21 *g* and will sure come back to read the end!!!
bye bye, birdie
person Willow Ann Rover
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please please please please PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM DYING for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASEEEEEEEEEE update soon!!

xoxo,
Willow Ann
person mysticneko
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this is the first fic I\'ve read that Draco\'s hasn\'t beat him. :) Thats a good thing. I like Draco\'s dad.
person mysticneko
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its good they got everything settled. Smut this chapter doesnt seem fitting. I agree with you Minks!
Takes some cake for another great chapter!
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... Someone knows how to right a fic. Especially orgasm worthy smuts. Would one put two t\'s in that if it were plural? Smuts, smutts. Well, whatever. I just go with whatever looks good. Also, smut-filled fics without a plot aren\'t necessarily a bad thing... There are lemons for Christ\'s sake! But, you know, a plot is good too. But a plot in which you can work in a lot of sex is even better! Cudos to you! I don\'t think that\'s spelt right. I don\'t think that\'s a word either...

The Phoenix,
Yes, I am that conceded. And I realize I spelt Phoenix wrong in my screen name but I\'m too lazy to change it, so yeah...
person Dana_aeryn
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story. I am in love with it, I would have its babies if I could. I am yearning for more, and yes, I check for updates every day, It gets better with every chaper. You have a fan in me.