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by rubycrush

person roxierose13
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"It's not conceit, it's self confidence." -- That's what they all say....lol.

Ah, it's so great, getting a little serious, but as long as there's hope that it won't get too dreary. Just wondering, any guesstimation on the length of this fic? Just wondering...update soon!
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*salacious smile* MMMMMMMmmmmmmmmm.... lovely love.... Sooo sexy!! ^.--
person swampthang
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the best story ever! Please update soon
person Remi
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved this chapter! I just adore Lucius!
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh minks my love...i don't know why it has taken me forever to realize that you were the author! either that or i was having brain freezes sometime since I began reading forbidden. It takes me going to your journal and me kicking myself. I swear I'm an airhead.

I LOVE the update. I love how Harry finally kills the bug. Granted what I kept thinking was, "Harry think of squashing the buggy and kill it that way." Draco is absolutely adorable..."You thought of me?" That is just awesome.

love you to bits and pieces

cyn (aka cyn_ful)
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I am TOTALLY loving this fic. Not only is it hotter than the blazes of hell, it's funny as all freakin' get-out. That scene in Potions (chapter4) where D walks up behind H and says that he bets H has a big thick one and would love to see it all the way down D's throat... it made my whole body shiver and cracked me up at the same time, which, with me, is seriously hard to do. Keep it up!
person bunnicle
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you know what? Pansy should be thrown into Azkaban. Love the story though. can't wait for the next chapter!
person muziyi0009
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am glad it finally get updated. I'v been waiting so long.
person Alison
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Draco carrying on about being in the history books was hilarious!! =o) Great chapter! Update soon please.
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Me AGAIN. Yes, you're gonna get real tired of me before you finish this fic. Hee! So... Snape as unwilling matchmaker. I adore it. It's so... so... evil yet perfect. And the masturbation scene. Hoo-ah!