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by rubycrush

person thrnbrooke
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I need chapter 12! That\'s not true! Severus told Lucius. Or rather hinted at it! Lucius better not screw this up!
person Lady Gray
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah for you!! glad you updated, I think your story is great, draco is a touch OOC BUT i think that since he is in love that is perfectly understandable!!! So sweet, so now, what will Lucius do? Will he come to Hogwarts, what will Draco do.....
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dies* Ooooooh, that was so good!! Now I\'m jest waiting for Pansy\'s little nosey ass to bang open that classrooms door and find Hermione and Draco there talking, assuming Granger\'s the one that\'s in Draco\'s pants! Ahaha! That\'d be funny. GREAT job! I\'m loving this entirely! Update soon!
person Chiaki Dark
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh.

My.

God..... *moans in agony at her heartbreak*


Great-fantastic chapter!!! I like your Hermione, and even your Ron. \"Realistic\" and yet, not too harsh in their finding out y\'know?? And oh... poor poor Draco. *smiles sadly* I\'ve read soo many fics with this pairing, but for some reason, this read, this confession, it made me a misty-eyed virgin slash reader all over again. Lovely story... I can\'t wait for the next chapter! And what shall ever happen when/if Harry finds out??!!! *clutches Harry&Draco plushie*

<3!
person muziyi0009
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. And I love this chapter most.
I can\'t believe it! Draco had loved Harry for years! He even saved himself for Harry! How cute!
Can\'t wait for chapter 12.
person WynterRose
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww, so sad. It is staring them both in the face, and they won\'t acknowledge it!! Lovely update!
person Kris
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff!! Keep going!! :)
person fyrefawkes
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHH!!! HE FOUND OUT!!! DRACO KNOWS! OH, THIS IS SOOO GOOD!!!!
person sbkar
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too short...I demand a hundred more words for the next chapter! More, I say!
person Rouisu
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for adding me at the bottom and replying. xD I felt so special. ^^ Anywho, yes, you have a very great point about the different but equal part and the fact that they could switch off. Guess I\'m just starting to warm upto the concept but I loved your 10th chapter, you have the best character depiction. You know how to illustrate Hermione, Ron, Harry and Draco so bloody well! ^___^



Yours truly,
Rouisu

P.S. Keep up the great work and thanks for updating so soon!