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by rubycrush

person Dembo~Chan
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy mucking hell!!! Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! I cannot wait until you update! So UPDATE!! ^_~
person Amessis
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just hopt that he changes his mind about the will strengthening potion- he can\'t do it! Oh Pansy- how she has it horribly wrong.
person Eowyns elixure
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOO is amazing!!! I love it! I particularily like how the whole thing is unraveling, very cleverly done. I am a little concerned about the note Hermione received though, no doubt Lucius notified Draco as to his recent revelation about H/D? Oh I hope it will be alright-I really do.

*Eowyns elixure
person Willow
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just keep writing. Just keep writing. Just keep writing, writing, writing...

Seriously, keep it up. The work is great! You had better finish. If you don\'t, I\'ll flame!
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"To Rhiannon U.L. and Chiaki Dark: The Draco/Hermione scene at the end of Chapter 11 was an emotional one for me to write...I got so caught up in it I wanted so desperately to cuddle Draco after his confession. I was hoping people would feel the build up of conflicting emotions inside him that led to that outburst. It may seem OCC for him (as Lady Gray pointed out), but it is because he
person thrnbrooke
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 13! Draco can\'t leave him now! What did Hermione find out? What information does Draco have? Oh more please!
person Anon
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought that scene was perfectly executed. keep it up!
person Tatemshope
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That\'s all I can say! Wow! and Wow again! You are doing such an amazing job of not copping out on this and giving into the cliche bunnies that tend to eat away at the plot of so many Harry/Draco stories. It would have been so easy for you to just rely on the \"ron is pissy\" cliche or the \"Hermione is hella hard to convince\" cliche or the \"Draco is a closed book and misunderstanding after misunderstanding keep him from telling anyone the truth\" cliche, but you didn\'t and I totally admire you for that.

You\'ve made this story very engaging and you\'re taking ownership of the story by not relying on plots that have already been overdone. I\'m loving this story and this Harry/Draco pairing. I really hope Draco gives Harry a chance and doesn\'t try to protect him too much. It\'s sweet that he\'s selfless but they both deserve happiness!

Oh well, enough rambling. Great story, update soon. :)
person Amessis
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope that Draco has given up on his original plan. Well done!
person ChibiNeji
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for contacting me for the updates^^ the two chapters were great... keep it up^^ I will wait for the next chapter to be up *smile*