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by rubycrush

person rachael leigh
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story....is it possible for you to email me when you update?
i hope so....
i really cant wait for them to get back together...its killing me...
keep up the good work.
person OldLoves
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was... so hot! Ha, ha, ha. I was expecting something a little different as an outcome of the detention, but if you had to make it that way, I guess I can\'t force you otherwise. LOL! Great chap. They need to hurry up and just let themselves go soon. That means you need to hurry up and post soon.

Old loves, they die hard... Old lies, they die harder...

Morgane
person Jessica
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!! The resistance and tension are great!!
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I try... I really do... *smile* WAY TO GO MINERVA!!! Down pat she has at that!!

LOVE how Snape observes their interaction!! *snicker* Can you IMMAGINE that in the movies?? (Droooooling... Shakes head..) TYPICAL male response to a crisis such as this! Hand them the task of checking and quantifying the aphrodisiac section of the storage room!! *derisive snort* Dear me, dear me...

(Raunchy moan....) Oooooooohhhhhhh my dear god in this our own sweet heaven!!! Harry getting unwittingly affected by all those.... different.... potions!!! (Pulls shirt off roughly and runs hand through mussed hair, catching a random drop of sweat trailing off stray damp lock.) That scene was restrained, sexy as HELL, tangible, boiling with musky tension and dear GOD that was soooo good!!! *groan* Soooo good..... soooo good....

*cough* It was a very good move that they didn\'t have sex but instead wanked off. It gives more credence to their restraint while still tingling along its edges. Very nicely done. Sadly that\'s one thing that so bloody few writers do!! Restraint is SEXY!!! It is in fact SEXIER than full out raunch!!!! It\'s all in the T.E.A.S.E!!! Rather like your Draco in the skirt... (Raised brow)

Also, still remaining in character!! (Bows in reverance...) Doing bloody good!! Keep it up!!!
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was just to scrumptious. I almost died. I can\'t wait for Harry and Draco to get back togethr! I beg of you! I will get my dust bunnies after you if you don\'t!
person taisha_aviel
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grins in a most evil manner.

ok, no pins...but I expect an update soon...our boys are depressed. and you\'re making my pet boa, draconis cry! (she sits urled around my neck as i read fanfic.)

*snake begins to cry

See??? Update soooon. *grabs hankey

don\'t cry, drac....
person the zedmeister
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your Snape is such an idiot! :D Did he really think that would get them back together? I\'m starting to wonder if he\'s ever been in a relationship at all - he obviously doesn\'t understand that sex doesn\'t fix anything.
person HinLover
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WRIR MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
tHIS IT THE MOST AMAZING STORY EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish I could writ like that! Also I would consider it an honor if you\'d read my story Test tube...ahem the other one is...ahem...yah...know.....ahem...anywhoooo....plzplzplzplzplzplzplzplz write more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz! Thank you! And Toodles!

From, seriously,
Your biggest fan, Nellie R.!
person blu sanada
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now Harry thinks that all this time he has been under a curse. At least Harry had his moment of happiness.
person blu sanada
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like Draco is starting to fall and Harry is just in denial.